Accurate Prediction (Challenge 153: Creepy Child)

May 25, 2010 20:50

The tarot card girl always frequented at the bar down near the docks. Even if she looked about twelve, her predictions were always accurate and wise, leaving people with a creepy vibe.

“He’ll break your heart,” She told Jack one day in 1927, “He’ll leave but come back broken.”

“Peter’s strong,” Jack replied, “He knows the death wasn’t his fault.”

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challenge, jack, tarot card girl, pg, creepy child, tw100, jack/oc, drabble, torchwood

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owensheart May 25 2010, 13:10:58 UTC
*gulp* oh poor Jack, that kid is really creepy

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topgeargirl2 May 26 2010, 02:50:45 UTC
Thanks

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rustydog May 25 2010, 17:22:13 UTC
"hissed" was a great choice there. Intensified the creepiness!

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topgeargirl2 May 26 2010, 02:49:44 UTC
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karaokegal May 25 2010, 21:11:04 UTC
Awwwww! I love Jack/Tarot Girl fics.

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topgeargirl2 May 26 2010, 02:48:27 UTC
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alba17 May 26 2010, 01:00:39 UTC
The Tarot Girl! I forgot about her. Good drabble.

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topgeargirl2 May 26 2010, 02:47:35 UTC
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ebineez01 May 26 2010, 09:14:09 UTC
nice. she's almost as creepy as the test-pattern girl from Life on Mars :)

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topgeargirl2 May 26 2010, 12:03:16 UTC
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