[Fic] The Language of Love (for firerose1300)

[postingwhore]

Title: The Language of Love
Author: venivincere
Recipient: firerose1300
Pairings: Niou/Yagyuu, Inui/Kaidoh
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Tennis, among other things, is observation.
Warnings: Underage characters getting off with each other.
Notes: 2,638 words. Lioness, I hope you enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Comments

[ketchupblood]

Oh! This was so wonderful! I love how you wrote Niou. His reactions are just so perfectly him, and the sense of betrayal and anger that you captured is written perfectly. Also, the way that Yagyuu doesn't get it and doesn't even think about his 'switch' with Kaidoh as betrayal because they're just so different for him was beautiful and the way that they reach a resolution and... I just really liked this.

Niou should be screeching and clawing and saying, “Get AWAY! GAY! THIS IS WAY TOO FUCKING GAY, YAGYUU!”

This made me laugh and it was also so perfect. It added a more realistic dimension to Niou's character, I guess.

[ketchupblood]

I'm really glad you liked it and thought that the characterization was good!

--Yumemiru-chan

[firerose1300]

I loved this, so much. It's completely perfect. <3

I enjoyed how you wrote it so smoothly. I also enjoyed the depth of the characters, Niou and Yagyuu were very perfect.

[firerose1300]

Thank you so much for your kind comment! I really appreciate it!

--Yumemiru-chan

[prillalar]

I liked this a lot! So great to see fic dealing with the Kaidoh-Yagyuu switch. I really liked how Niou and Yagyuu worked things out between them. :)

Inui and Kaidoh were also doofy and sweet. ♥

[everlind]

Ah, this was wonderful. It was sexy and utterly boyish and had a wonderful take on the D1 switch.

Thank you, this was an amazing piece of Niou/Yagyuu!