[Fic] Trine (for ketchupblood)

[postingwhore]

Title: Trine
Author: impressioniste
Recipient: ketchupblood
Pairing/Characters: Sanada/Yukimura/Yanagi, though it's primarily 'deep friendship'.
Rating: PG-13, tops, for swearing.
Summary: Sanada falls victim to sudden debilitating illness and Yukimura blames himself. Yanagi struggles to hold the team together. All three realize just how important their relationship

Comments

[fiddery]

Ahhh, this is such beautiful Troika. I really love seeing fics that explore this idea of deep friendship between the boys of tenipuri, and this was such a good example of it. Your characterization of Yukimura is really enjoyable, I don't really know how to explain how much I like it. Wonderful fic, I was happy to read it!

Just a note to the recipient, Verbena.

[anonymous]

I really hope you enjoy this. I was really pressed for time and my personal life was (and still is) going pretty crazy at the time, so it wasn't the massive plot-and-character development piece I really wanted it to be.

I truly hope this is at least moderately adequate and that I have met at least some of your preferences with this piece, which is much shorter and less intensive than I'd have liked.

[anonymous]

Sorry for being late! It's finals season now. D:

I love how Yukimura responded to this and how Sanada, even, took it better than him, and how much Yukimura and Yanagi were worried. I love how, at the end, you have the three of them moving forward together.

Thank you so much for this wonderful fic!

-verbena

[anonymous]

Oh, it's perfectly all right!

I'm just very relieved that you enjoyed it.

[ms_worplesdon]

Lovely!

[link621]

I love how you potray the friendship between the three boys here - how Yukimura is completely beside himself, but Yanagi is there to try to keep him reigned in, and Sanada is trying to be Mr. Reasonable (but can't when Yukimura is acting nuts).

Really, the only complaint I have is that it ended! It leaves so many questions and I was so fascinated by where you were going with everything that I was excited to see more, see how the rest of the team handled the change, how things changed, how Sanada handled the change over a long period of time, etc. I would be interested to see more, if you ever felt so compelled as to continue with this idea.

[link621]

I would honestly love to continue it independently after the exchange is over if I can. I originally outlined a much longer piece but problems in my personal life really forced me to either cut it short or drop from the exchange. :( I really didn't want to not give anything, so I was able to come up with this, at least.

I'm really thrilled you liked it, I was really worried about it seeming haphazardly done.

[link621]

No, it doesn't seem haphazard at all - but I did get the sense that this was a longer piece that got cut short due to time constraints. I know how the personal life stuff goes, though, and I'm glad you didn't drop out!