[Fic] Disconnected (for venivincere)

[fishpatrol]

Title: Disconnected
Author: kashewmoo
Recipient: venivincere
Pairing: Oishi/Kikumaru
Rating: R
Summary: Kikumaru is upset by the lack of communication between he and Oishi while they’re attending separate high schools, and doesn’t know how to deal with it.
Warnings: Sexual content and lots of stupid, but at least they’re cute? ♥
Notes: Happy holidays, Yumemiru-chan

Comments

[nerdish]

This was cute! And at times frustrating (but the good kind) because they're so good for each other. I'm glad it worked out in the end. Good job!

[fiddery]

So adorable, and like nerdish says, frustrating at times, but I have to say, this was such a refreshing Golden Pair fic to me! I really enjoyed reading it, and I had to laugh at the part where Kikumaru makes up the rest of the voice mail message.

I enjoyed this fic a lot!

[link621]

I agree with both comments above: this is a refreshing perspective on the Golden Pair. It's not too sweet, but also not too sour. Oh, and Tezuka. ♥

Well done. Thank you for the smile first thing in the morning.

arigato gozaimasu!!!!!

[anonymous]

Thank you mango tango! This was just the story I wanted, with boys acting like boys and having all the hangups and imagination of boys. You've captured Eiji's flightiness so well, and hos overactive imagination. And Oishi's seriousness and vanillaness. They do set each other off so well. I liked your cryptic Tezuka and I could see so clearly Momo with his family when he was on the phone. What a perfect gift! Thank you so much! --Yumemiru-chan
PS sorry for typos. My internet is limited to my phone for awhile. .)>.)

[poilass]

I like stories where they all have to negotiate things changing after junior high, and I kind of adore Eiji taking up gymnastics instead of tennis. Oishi asking Tezuka for advice is hilarious, as is his helpful response: "so, is there a problem?" And Oishi trying to decide what flavour toothpaste Eiji tastes like! Very cute.