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On Bonnie Brae (PG-13)

Aug 27, 2007 14:35

Title On Bonnie Brae
Author toolazytowork
Pairing House/Wilson
Rating PG-13
Summary There's nothing left to do but wait. If you're lucky you have someone to wait with.
Warnings Apocafic.
Word Count 3230
Notes Big thanks to recrudescence for the beta.

( Activate emergency operations plan. )

house/wilson, fanfiction

Comments 43

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toolazytowork August 30 2007, 15:45:07 UTC

Thank you!
There was a part of me that really wanted to have them 'decide to up and screw each other in the .02 seconds they had left to live' because that would've been hawt! But the end of the world PWP will have to wait for another day.
Some time ages ago I heard about a study where drama students and random people on the street were told that someone in their family had died. The drama students emoted like mad. The random people reacted very quietly. They went numb. That stayed with me.

The Twilight Singers are an amazing band. Bonnie Brae is one of my favorite songs (of any song). (If you want to see a whole other take on the song go to youtube and search: "Bonnie Brae Rescue Me")

Wordy post. Sorry.

sydneylover150 August 30 2007, 04:36:45 UTC

Whoa. Now that was something. I'll admit I have a softspot for apocolo-fics. They make people's characters so much clearer and bring out the true character. Anyhow, loved the fic great job!

toolazytowork August 30 2007, 15:51:55 UTC

So much love for the end of the world. It's such a dreary topic, a real downer. That's why I like it.
Thank you!

petriepuss August 30 2007, 11:28:59 UTC

This really worked for me, and I love the extra tension coming from their role reversal.

The description of the kiss was very intense, I shivered. The last line made me smile and sad at the same time. Lovely fic!

toolazytowork August 30 2007, 15:55:32 UTC

It's interesting, I didn't intentionally reverse their roles. That's just how the story went.

Shivers! I love it. Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

dangomango August 30 2007, 16:49:18 UTC

Loved this, specifically the part about Wilson becoming more cynical than House--it rings true. And the part with Wilson helping House down the stairs...those poor woobies.

toolazytowork August 31 2007, 20:50:42 UTC

Don't you want to just hug the poor boys? I know I do.
Thank you!

pun August 31 2007, 19:58:59 UTC

This is good. My favorite part was the exchange about what if Wilson kissed House, and then the kiss itself. And House having a stronger will to live than Wilson in the end makes sense.

toolazytowork August 31 2007, 20:57:04 UTC

Thank you for reading! I always love to hear what people liked best. I think House would have had so much time to think about dying he'd want to make the most of what time there was.