Beta?

[willowtook2]

I have a story that I wrote several years ago and I would like someone to read it and tell me if it is any good. It is very long and the main character is Pippin and someone eles plus the others from the Fellowship(and one extra)could someone help?sorry for putting this on here, forgot how to work this.

Comments

[maniac1]

I'll give it a go, willow. Unless dreamflower (Barbara) wants to, because she would do a much better job of beta'ing than I would.

How long is the story?

willow's story

[willowtook2]

wow, where do I begin. There is about 25 chapters and each one is titled with a song that relates to the story.I have been working on it for about 4 years now.Each chapter is several notebook pages long.It is based on the LOTR story line but with pippin as the main Character.A young girl who is half elf and half hobbit is brought to the Shire and lives with the Brandybucks.The story is mainly about them and what they go through together. I would rate the story at PG-13. Even if it is not something you would want on the LJ, I would still like your opinion on it. If you both want to read it that would be fine too.I value you thoughts on it. Thank you so much for wanting to.Please tell me how to get it to you.

Re: willow's story

[maniac1]

Sounds very intriguing :)

Why don't we just try to send an email attachment? Do you have it on a Word document or a Notepad? My email address is debnear@comcast.net. Let's see if that will work, first of all.

Looking forward to reading it :)

Re: willow's story

[maniac1]

Unless, of course, it's done in longhand. Then you could mail it to me. If you want to sent me your email address, I'll sent you my address :)

[araikiara]

Hey there, I'm a fairly frequent beta in a handful of other communities and would be happy to help.
Also you might want to try fanfiction.net, as it has a very handy little beta page now.