Devil in a Blue Dress [FanFic]

[took_skye]

Title: Devil in a Blue Dress
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Foyet/Prentiss, Jordan Todd
Rating: FRM
Summary: Officer George Foyet learns that your first dance with one of the ladies of Quaint Cove has the potential to also be your last.
Notes: This is something of an epilogue to The Todd Case, but can also be taken as a one-shot of my Noir AU "Living For

Comments

[mcgarrygirl78]

Awesome : )

Who is this dude, 50 Cent? He's gonna get shot nine times and not die? JK. I like that Emily shot him even if Jordan ruins it by being a bad shot. I love the scene in the bar, the sweat, the slick banter, and of course the foreplay.

I like that that it was Emily who finally got him at his own game. I know there arent many women (or anyone really) who could do that. Even if he didnt die, nice to see he's not indestructible.

[took_skye]

Haha, thanks! ^_^

Nah...Foyet only got shot six times, hahaha!! ;-) Emily's a tough bird in the noir, not one to be fucked with on any level, haha! Jordan has a lot of passion and, of course, wants revenge for what happened to her, but she's not the best shot. See, I can write some Prentiss/Foyet you like, haha! ;-)

Emily's willing to go into the gutter with him if that's what she thinks she has to do. Also, haha, it's nice to see someone who thinks women are weak get their asses handed to them by a woman, don't you agree? :D

[mcgarrygirl78]

Oh I definitely agree. It was nice to see it handed to him by Prentiss for sure. But JJ would be cooler just because he definitely thinks she cant do it.

This was really good though, sexy and dangerous but not too much for my sometimes delicate sensibilities. I enjoyed it and it made me want to write something dirty.

[took_skye]

:D Haha, well JJ might at some point but there's gonna be a lot of shit she'll have to put up with first (remember, this is just after she had Lil still). ...She'll have the affair with Will though, that's something at least, haha! ;-)

I'm glad you think so! (Especially knowing this isn't your usual pairing.) Haha, it almost went further but Emily wasn't having any of it so I took her lead and she delivered! Yay dirty things!! ^_^

[pink_siamese]

Now THAT is what I am talking about.

[took_skye]

Haha, glad you like it, Pink! ;-)

[pink_siamese]

I miss Emily and George together.

[took_skye]

Haha, awww...you could always write more of them yourself? I know I'd read it :D

Either way something tells me this isn't exactly the end of these two in the noir...you know George, being bested just shows him there's a challenger out there worthy of his attention, haha! ...Also he's already screaming about how this isn't over, haha! ;-)

[dirtymindedho]

I love this. I've always had a little facination with Emily/Foyet together. Weird, right? I know. I think Drawn In Slow Strokes did it to me.
I love how she got him at his own game and there was just something undeniably sexy about the whole thing. Emily is such a sexy, hardass, bitch in this. Haha.
I'd love to read more of them together! :)

[took_skye]

Yay, I'm glad you do! Oh, haha, me too and, yeah, Drawn in Slow Strokes totally did it to me too, hahaha!!!

I felt someone really should and Noir!Hotch Officer Foyet be looking for, he'd sense a trap, but he doesn't see women as much of a threat so...yup, haha! Also, this one involved a sexy little pick-up and dance scene which, haha, it always good times! ^_^ Oh, haha, yeah, Emily's pretty hardcore in this :D

Well Foyet's still alive and you know him, he's always looking for a challenge and Emily is certainly that, haha! ;-)

[pink_siamese]

Bahahah, I live to spread my corruption around...

I'd love to know who came up with that prompt. To my knowledge, s/he has never come forward. Too bad, though. I owe whoever it was 81,231 words worth of thanks. ;-)

[dirtymindedho]

Haha, yeah you definitely spread that corruption! Haha, it was definitely a good prompt though.
All this dark, Foyet, Noir-y fics totally want to make me try my hand at it but I don't think I've got the finesse...Hmm...
Any tips guys? I could really use them. :)