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took_skye

Trouble is My Business [FanFic]

Oct 15, 2010 16:14

Title: Trouble is My Business
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Foyet/JJ
Rating: FRT
Summary: Foyet makes a visit to Rossi's club about increasing his payoff and has a run in with Reid.
Notes: This is the seventh piece in the Noir AU which I'm calling "Living For the Night" thanks to let_it_linger21. Again, first person (this time from Foyet's POV), dark, gritty, and ( Read more... )

the todd case, jj, rossi, foyet, criminal minds, noir, living for the night, reid, fanfiction

Comments 4

daylyn October 15 2010, 22:07:22 UTC

Oh no! Poor Reid!!!!

I love this fic. I love how everyone is recognizable as themselves. Thrilled to see another installment.

took_skye October 15 2010, 23:55:39 UTC

Haha, don't worry, he's alive! Just a little worse for the wear.

Aw, thank you!! I'm glad they're still, um, themselves despite the noir twist. And that you liked this piece (I was worried since I shot this out quick between other things). :D Stay tuned, more to come!! :D

dirtymindedho October 16 2010, 09:29:42 UTC

I love it. Is it bad though that Foyet is turning out to be my favourite character in this? Haha. I also think Foyet/JJ is quickly becoming my favourite pairing too. At least in AU world.

Poor Reid, the poor boy got hurt all because Foyet is greedy. Although I suspect he would've gotten hurt eventually.

Rossi really needs to open his eyes and see what's going on around him. Evidently Foyet is a great assest to him and I'd just pay the damn money if I was him.

So, I'm thinking of trying a Noir fic of my own. It may or may not be a Criminal Minds one but I was wondering if you had any tips on writing Noir. You've seriously peaked my interest into this genre.

Anyway I love, as per usual! Can't wait for the next instalment. :)

took_skye October 16 2010, 15:11:11 UTC

Thanks! Haha, no, not at all...bad guys are fun, haha! Foyet/JJ is the, oddly, the most solid pairing in this too, haha! (I don't think they'd work out outside the AU honestly, heehee!)

Reid's trying...he'll be okay though, don't worry. And he won't be the only one Foyet hurts either, haha! ;-)

Oh don't dismiss Rossi...he's smarter than he's acting just like, well, Rossi, haha! But Rossi's got that pride thing, sometimes it gets in the way.

Really? Cool! (And super cool if I helped give you the idea, haha!!) Um...I love noir to start, haha, and watch a lot of noir films (old and modern - Sin City and Kiss Kiss Bang Bang with Robert Downey Jr) and read noir stuff - Raymond Chandler! That helps, I think, lol!

Thanks so much! Just stay tuned and more will come! :D