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took_skye

Blood in the Water (Part 3/?) [FanFic]

Jun 30, 2011 09:15

Title: Blood in the Water (Part 3/?)
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Team, Strauss, Cutler Beckett, James Norrington, Mercer, Lil Foyet, mention of Groves & Gillette
Rating: FRT
Summary: Kali's voice was clear, pure, but no less thunderous on Captain Hotchner's soul. “I have a mission for you. You will do it. Now.”
Notes: Third part of the first big " ( Read more... )

between the devil and the deep blue sea, team, criminal minds/potc, mercer, lil foyet, gen, norrington, beckett, fanfiction

Comments 4

dirtymindedho July 1 2011, 01:56:28 UTC

I like it. Haha. I especially like Lil in this AU. I think because she's older and the time period she be a bit more cunning and devious than in the Noir. Mainly because she doesn't have so many people watching the way she acts and what she does. Interesting.
Can't wait to read more! :)

took_skye July 1 2011, 12:28:00 UTC

Haha, thanks! Yeah, Lil's...different in this, haha! It's a mix of things, including the things you mentioned and how differently she was raised and who she's around. In this AU she can't run around killing folks and partying, she needs to be more subtle in what she does to get what she wants and stay alive. It's actually a ton of fun to write and note the differences :D

Thanks again and, haha, more will come! :D

all_things413 July 1 2011, 20:07:13 UTC

Who's Lil? Not the Lil in the story, but the person dirtymindedho was talking about?

Great chapter. Oh man, Elle's in trouble and Dave too, by the looks of it. I'm anxious for another chapter. This has to be one of the best CM AUs I've read so far. Bravo.

took_skye July 1 2011, 20:32:41 UTC

Ah, haha, okay here's where things get tricky...same Lil, different universe. Lil started off the daughter of JJ and George "The Reaper" Foyet in my Noir-based AU "Living for the Night". In that one she's a sixteen-year-old serial killer who's close to Gideon and an adult Jack Hotchner. If you wanna check that AU out use the tag "Living For the Night"...there's one-shots and longer tales like with this AU :D

Thank you! Haha, yeah, they're both some serious trouble-makers at the moment...but they'll be worth it ;-) Another chapter along with a few one-shots are in the works, don't worry! :D Awww, thank you so much, I'm so glad you're enjoying it! ^_^