Storm Winds [FanFic]

Jun 15, 2011 18:44

Title: Storm Winds
Author: Tooks
Pairing: Lil Foyet, James Norrington/Lil Foyet
Rating: FRM
Prompt: Masturbation
Summary: Looking up Lil saw skulls in the clouds; their eyes flashing with electricity as they watched her hand trail down her body.
Notes: Another venture into the Criminal Minds/Pirates of the Caribbean AU with Norrington and Lil ( Read more... )

between the devil and the deep blue sea, norrington, criminal minds/potc, prompt, fanfiction, lil foyet, het

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ophelivia June 16 2011, 05:17:59 UTC
Do I LOVE it? Ohhh yes.

This gave such insight into Lil. The terrible things that turn her on and the beautiful way you express them are just wonderful. I love James' fear of her at the end.

Just a minor note but I really need to mention it--I have SUCH a sleep talk kink it's ridiculous. So thank you for that.

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took_skye June 16 2011, 12:37:06 UTC
Heehee, yay! I'm really glad to hear that because I LOVE your stuff! ^_^

Haha, yeah, see Lil's hard to describe you sorta just gotta see her in action. She's very soft at first sight, but she's completely vicious deep down...not unlike a certain lord we know ;-) James is smart, haha! It's best to approach Lil with guards up, she's rather unpredictable, haha!

I got the Norri talks in his sleep from you, haha! You had him talking in one of your pieces and, as I thought about, it made sense for him. So I'd thank yourself too ;-)

I'm really thrilled you liked this! (And can't wait for you to get to see when Lil meets Beckett and Mercer...it might get ugly in the best possible ways, heehee! ^_^) Thanks so much for the comment! :D

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gracebe June 16 2011, 19:10:59 UTC
She nodded and smiled soft. “Keep me in mind.”

“For?”

“When you need to forget.”

Brilliant!

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took_skye June 16 2011, 19:58:10 UTC
Ah, Lil, she always knows just what to say to implant that last, lingering, thought about her, doesn't she? ;-)

Seriously though, thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :D

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