Fic Post! - 'Pivotal' ~ Chapter 24 and a Rec!

[toobusy2write]

Comments

[thatotherperv]

oh my god, you are SUCH a FUCKING COCK-TEASE. good thing I love you anyway. gah. that was hot. goddammit, Kat. I'm just going to pretend they have another plane ride some day where Spike blows Angel, because...hello oral fixation, goodbye anxiety

loved the tai chi moment and that Angel knew Spike was watching him, lol. great tension between Angel and Wes when Wes found out they'd shared a room.

and he got him hair gel! awww. must be twooo wuuuvvv

[toobusy2write]

Hee! I'm a cock-tease! Would it help to tell you that I actually intended them to go all the way when I was writing this chapter, but then I got this other idea I liked better, so I went with that? So really, it's my muse's fault, not mine. *is just an innocent bystander*

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, even if it was a big tease, lol. Glad you liked the tai chi part, especially, and the hair gel. Yep, it's twooo wuuuvvv, they just haven't realized it yet, silly boys. *bg*

[vamptastica]

GAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH evil evil evil....I LOVE IT!!! that was so HOT. And the whole hair gel thing, thinking of our spikey in such intimate terms like that...just wonderful. I can't wait for more!!!

can NOT wait. :D

[toobusy2write]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter so much, even the evil parts, haha. Also glad you liked the hair gel bit. I rather liked that myself. *bg*

[dragonydreams]

Aww, Angel arranged for hair gel for Spike.

I fully support Angel's method of distracting Spike. It should happen more often. Wanna hurt Xander for interrupting them like that.

[toobusy2write]

LOL, it is a good method, isn't it? And yeah, that was some really bad timing on Xander's part. *snicker*

Glad you liked the hair gel part, too. Thanks for the feedback! *g*

[toobusy2write]

Secondly - you really can't reveal that you know you are being evil and then write 'lmao'. That's just not funny - now we know that you are doing it on purpose. Prick-tease... *g*

Damn. My secret's out, LOL.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter, especially the Tai Chi scene and the almost-sex on the plane. Thanks for the feedback! *bg*

[lexa4227]

You are so a tease. *lol* The sexual tension between Spike and Angel is very thick. Another great chapter. Looking forward in finding out what happens next.

[toobusy2write]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter, in spite of me being a tease. *g*