have this great idea for a story that im going to write soon i hope. please comment if you think its good and any iders that could make my story better
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Personally, I feel that rape should be treated with great care and respect due to the long-term traumatic effects, so, again personally, I would probably find a different plot-point to reach the same outcome.
Also... maybe just me, but I'm wondering why the leader of a group of people who use women for sex and then sell them decides to have sex with Tony? That one definitely needs some explanation.
If you decide to stick with the rape as a plot-point, you should definitely research thoroughly and you'll probably get a long story out of trying to deal with the aftermath in a realistic way. The few stories I've read where rape is a plot-point that I've actually liked have included this long, long realistic recuperation, but... mostly, I have to say that stories where rape plays a major part aren't stories I read.
thank you the idear for this story just randomly came into my head one day so it doesnt really have any meaning behind it thank you i shall try thinking of what to do with this but i dont really know seen as this will be the first story i will write.
the ideathat the learder whats to have sex with tony is the fact that i think tony kinda a pretty boy to him so he whant to try somthing new i guess. im not really sure.
thank you for your thoughts i shall try and come up with something to make this story more readable or understandalbe, and also put all of your thoughts into consideraration.
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Also... maybe just me, but I'm wondering why the leader of a group of people who use women for sex and then sell them decides to have sex with Tony? That one definitely needs some explanation.
If you decide to stick with the rape as a plot-point, you should definitely research thoroughly and you'll probably get a long story out of trying to deal with the aftermath in a realistic way. The few stories I've read where rape is a plot-point that I've actually liked have included this long, long realistic recuperation, but... mostly, I have to say that stories where rape plays a major part aren't stories I read.
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the ideathat the learder whats to have sex with tony is the fact that i think tony kinda a pretty boy to him so he whant to try somthing new i guess. im not really sure.
thank you for your thoughts i shall try and come up with something to make this story more readable or understandalbe, and also put all of your thoughts into consideraration.
THANK YOU
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