green eyes alternate endings

Jun 22, 2008 10:06

Author’s Note: It was SO hard not to use this ending. But I knew which one was most fitting and which one was most realistic, however I must say I do like my writing best in this one. For all you Pro-Human fans, this if for you.

Edward’s POV.

“The hospital needed Carlisle for a few hours. He’s really sorry.” Esme’s face was apologetic as she ( Read more... )

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ijkliza June 22 2008, 15:36:31 UTC
Ahhhh, these were both so sad!
I have to say though, the pro-human one really hit home, probably because I would love to see them be human and grow old together. It was perfect.

Ugh, this story is amazing!
So sad it's over.
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mana1023 June 22 2008, 16:02:04 UTC
That second ending was so gut wrenching and beautiful at the same time.

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aliceinforks June 22 2008, 16:31:06 UTC
can't.stop.crying!

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anonymous June 22 2008, 16:37:21 UTC
Aww, the last one was better than the first but soooooooo sad. The original= #1 of course, but i really liked the second one too. AMAZINGNESS!!!!

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kitkat12891 June 22 2008, 16:56:49 UTC
All three endings were amazing!! I loved the chosen one 'cause I wanted them to both become vampires, but the alternates were both beautiful in different ways.
I'm so sad that the story is over!
I just want to say one last time that you did a great job and keep up the wonderful work!
This story has been truly enjoyable to read. =)

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