LJ Idol - Week 23 - Intersection - "If you don't live it, it won't come out of your horn"

Jun 01, 2020 23:28

Carrie sat in the sand and listened to the surf. The sun had set behind her ten minutes ago. Her surf board was close by her feet. Her son was bodysurfing in the last of the reflected sunset light. It had been a very long week. She picked up the beer beside her and took a sip ( Read more... )

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adoptedwriter June 6 2020, 13:39:48 UTC
You gave me a nice respite trip to the beach! Thank you!

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rayaso June 6 2020, 16:32:03 UTC
This was such a thoughtful entry, encapsulating what many are feeling, and I loved the picture!

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d0gs June 8 2020, 17:22:14 UTC
I absolutely loved this! You conjured feelings and emotions so perfectly here and the imagery was beautiful. The ending is so wonderful too.

I loved writing with you! Thank you for being an awesome partner! <3

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bleodswean June 8 2020, 18:37:02 UTC
A really bittersweetly delightful evening at the shore. Thank you for this.

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flipflop_diva June 8 2020, 19:44:42 UTC
This was a great piece to balance out the chaos of d0gs'. I love how calm and reflective it is, and you both really did show both sides of this amazing friendship.

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