well that's interesting.

[tongzhiai]

Did I finally write Shinhwa fic I like myself? Yes. Is it pretentious and all in lower-case? Yup. Will I be a pretentious whore and post it as it is? You betcha.

a state of art
shinhwa, hyesung-centric (jinsyung), pg. ~1,000 words. second person, probably ridiculously angsty & prententious.

Comments

[sugarless_666]

♥!!!

Maybe it's pretentious, but that's Hyesung for you. I love the quiet, brooding, somewhat understated air and all the unsaid wangst in the background. And then the Jinnie part; it's so overwhelming, just like how you describe Jinnie's love.

if the universe was a person, it would be eric First & last quote, because I'd just end up quoting everything. But this line. Hell yeah. ♥

This was so, so perfect, and just how I see them. Thank you so much for writing it.

[tongzhiai]

I used to write in a style closer to this before I started at SuJu fandom.. I was reading my old fics and wondered why none of my recent fics resembled them in style and then decided to experiment with this, and Shinhwa. It seemed to work, though it does have a pretentious edge to it, especially lower case lettering etc. But glad it really worked for you. :)

I liked this idea that it's difficult to define relationships to even people you love, because honestly that's what it's like in the real world. Everything's super-complex like that.

And especially with RicSyung, they both seem to have trouble doing this.

[ayray]

You see, I know nothing about Shinhwa, so I read it as original. I love it, when you write from the character's point of view, because you can fill the monologue whith such different emotions for each of personages you write. I enjoyed reading this fic - as usual =)

[tongzhiai]

You should get into Shinhwa. They're full of kpop shiny, though older than SuJu of course. Just search "shinhwa" on youtube & enjoyyy.