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{예재} Addiction and His Name

Jan 06, 2010 12:56

Addiction and His Name
Yesung/Jaejoong, r, 1513 words
prompt: (found at milkpoet)
Once I thought I found love, but then I realized
I was just out of cigarettes.
-Lineage, by Jeffrey McDaniel

( In the year thirteen hundred and thirteen,
a little boy died, who had the exact same scars as me. )

#crossover: dbsj, pairing: yesung/jaejoong, #personal challenge, !rating: r

Comments 17

ricecakestar January 6 2010, 18:19:56 UTC

Nice~

That's a lot of work for a cigarette there, hehe.
Wonder what's going to happen when he needs another one. lol.

And you don't write bad smut D:
It's pretty good . w . *suddenly feels like a perv* *shot*

Your smut is better than mine, at any rate :P

ricecakestar January 6 2010, 18:20:24 UTC

Sweet~ I'm first (again)

:DDD

tarmenel January 6 2010, 18:26:09 UTC

sweet jesus woman
you are fast!

I swear, when I read that line from the poem all I thought about was Jaejoong and wall sex. HELLO PROCLIVITY OF MINE. /PETS WALLSEX.
I guess that'll teach Jaejoong to leave his cigarettes at home? Now he'll leave them at home more often ;D

Writing this made me want dirty sex against a wall outside a club with Yesung. Just saying. TMI?

Regardless of how awful this is, you read it and commented and I love you. ♥♥♥

I fail. ricecakestar January 6 2010, 19:41:17 UTC

LOL. I thought of the wallsex part when I read that too. Just not with specific people although Yehsung did come to mind.

Yes, Jaejoong, leave your cigarettes at home.
Yehsung should forget his at home next time *shot*

TMI? NOT AT ALL ♥
ILU TOO 8D

Thread 6

shihan_ai January 6 2010, 23:54:03 UTC

hey baby OMFG WALLSEX. I WAS EXPECTING IT BUT I STILL OOOHED AND AHHHED OVER IT. FUCK. IT'S HOT.

just:
Jongwoon is pushes Jaejoong’s loose pants down

and do you mean loses himself? that one im not sure about that one. *sheepish smile*

just thought you might wanna know....

but i can totally see this happening in a dark alley somewhere no joke.

i loved the last bit after they fucked each other...the smoke...*shivers*

mawaru_berry January 14 2010, 21:34:42 UTC

…

/faints

fierce!Yesung

/faints again

WALLSEX.

Jae…no underwear…

…

This comment makes so much sense.

tarmenel January 15 2010, 00:13:12 UTC

i love it. ♥

kasgjakgs fierce yesung is my favorite kind of yesung!

mawaru_berry January 15 2010, 03:36:23 UTC

fierce Yesung is amazing. gahhh /spazzes

<3

mayshy January 16 2010, 21:34:17 UTC

omg!!! i have been looking everywhere for some new yesungXjaejoong and i finally found it! it was awesome! it was just so...wow. this could definitely have an epilogue lol. and damn yesung was just too sexy~

yesungswifey January 16 2010, 23:22:33 UTC

AWESOME! i loved it!

XD i can just see someone walking past and just stops dead in their tracks when they see a naked man smoking in an alley lol