A fic meme!
From flo_nelja:
Quote a bit of my writing at me? Find that one story of mine that you really like, and find a sentence or a paragraph that presses your prose-buttons in the right way, and comment here with it, no matter how long or short.
Then copypasta this into your journal, and we'll all have a big love-in!...Although I seriously don't really have that ( Read more... )
Quote a bit of my writing at me? Find that one story of mine that you really like, and find a sentence or a paragraph that presses your prose-buttons in the right way, and comment here with it, no matter how long or short.
Then copypasta this into your journal, and we'll all have a big love-in!...Although I seriously don't really have that ( Read more... )
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My favourites lines in chapter one are :
Uzura looked frontward at the gear Drosselmeyer was staring at. On it was a threesome of feathers designed as if they could be used as quills: one was large and black, like a raven’s; one was smaller and yellow, like a duck’s; and the last was slightly larger than the yellow one, a white one. (love the symbolism)
And the scene that comes after :
“Eh?” He glared at her. “Uzura-chan, this is no time for playing games. Hand me that little feather now.”
Uzura shook her head. “No-zura.”
“What? Come now, come now, let me have it…I know just what to do with them - and anyhow, I saw them first…”
Uzura shook her head again stubbornly. For one thing, she highly doubted that Drosselmeyer was just going to stick them in his hat. “No way-zura. It’s Ahiru’s feather-zura.”
But I also love a lot this part :
“Stop stressing out over all of this. These matters are all very trivial in the long run, after all…and besides,” he joked, “if you die of anxiety, how will you ever ( ... )
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