"Family" - Part one of sequel to "Hesitate"

[tommyhanson]

Family

It was Parker that finally got to him, in the end. Eliot had gone to his apartment (not home, because home had gotten blown up months ago) after playing a double set down at the old ‘Bull-rider’s Tavern’. He was tired and dirty from baking beneath the stage lights, and the dust that he’d kicked up from the walk to his truck had stuck to his

Comments

[just_ruth]

*laughs* I can see this! Paker is this awkward will-o-the-whisp who always seems to come up with the unexpected. I like this a lot. Thank you!

[tommyhanson]

Ooh, hey, two comments in one day from you? I feel special. =) I'm glad that you like it, really really glad. Thanks for the review(s)! =D

me likes.

[rodlox]

a plant! she's getting him a plant!!

and yeah, Parker does have a way with words and a talent for vanishing.

Re: me likes.

[tommyhanson]

Lol, I was actually staring at my computer screen for like 20 minutes thinking 'what would Parker do?', and then I thought 'Ooh! Plant!'... So I''m glad you like it. =)

[elebridith]

Just read both parts! Oh my, poor Eliot... I can see how he would feel like that. But if the plant doesn't persuade him to come back, nothing will! *g*
Is there going to be more?

[tommyhanson]

Ah yes, the plant is extremely persuasive. (Hee hee, 'flower power', lol.) =D And yes, I'm intending there to be more (although I'm a full-time college student, so it may take a little while) although I'm not entirely sure how much more. I'm not actually in charge of the story. The characters are, I'm just their scribe. ;)

[wah_keetcha]

oooo yes I can could totally see this happening. I liked it, no 'beating around the bush' so to say Parker laid it right out on the table, said her peace and walked away. I believe your right on the money with her personality.

okay, I'll stop rambling.

Good job.

[tommyhanson]

*grins* I'm glad you like it, and I'm especially glad you thought I got Parker right. It's so hard to pin her down. And I like your rambling, it makes me smile, lol. Thanks for the review! =)

[theoriginal_ist]

I really liked this. Aah! The plant! Lol. It is such a Parker thing to think about too. ::grins:: I read that there is more? ::grins wider:: I can't wait to read it! Wonderful job!

[tommyhanson]

I'm very glad you like it! And yes, there will be more, I actually started the next chapter today (during my Art Appreciation class, actually, much to the chagrin of my professor.) It's not done yet, but hopefully it will be before too long...