The Final Battle. 12/? : Unexpected Developments

Sep 03, 2009 22:12

Title: The Final Battle, part 12 : Unexpected Developments
Fandom: Silmarillion
Characters: Finrod, Gimli, Legolas, Thorin and Durin, two new faces.
Prompt: 024. Family
Word Count: 1368
Rating: General
Summary: Finrod and friends have to deal with an unexpected sort of visitor.
Author's Notes: Part of a Work in Progress based on the Dagor Dagorath ( Read more... )

!the final battle, fandom:silmarillion, who:finrod, challenge:fanfic100, who:legolas, who:gimli

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minviendha September 4 2009, 02:21:39 UTC
Still with the apocalypse things, I like it. And the bit about them living as humans born different made me go TYRION and then I was ashamed of myself.

A couple small things... "our families with kill" and "...to remain a darkness that" etc. Other than that, though - and you know, WANT MORE AR/FEANORIANS - still enjoying immensely.

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tomboy_typist September 4 2009, 02:49:14 UTC
*edited*

Trying to alternate the POVs, but it will happen.

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ifshadowsoffend September 4 2009, 03:56:17 UTC
:D I stared and stared at description of the footprints, and then I realized it had to be hobbits and got all excited. XD And hee, they found a Gamgee. I think I like Dandelion.

I'm gonna be anxious over ever Finrod chapter until Narvi shows up again, I'll have you know. XD

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tomboy_typist September 4 2009, 04:13:21 UTC
Thank you! I had the hardest time finding his name, srsly.

I sorry? Though you know, maybe the hostage dwarf ain't Narvi... *is evvvvvil*

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ifshadowsoffend September 4 2009, 04:16:07 UTC
XD Whether he is or not I'm gonna be wondering what's happened to Narvi until we see him again.

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tomboy_typist September 4 2009, 04:18:49 UTC
My promise to you is that I won't leave this plot trail unaddressed. For realz. <33333

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