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The Final Battle. 7/? : Of Darkness, We Shall Rise

Aug 25, 2009 13:11

Who : Turgon, Elrond, a mysterious elf, some human OCs
Fandom : Silmarillion
What: Turgon and Elrond seek out the armies of Men for the upcoming battles.
Word Count : 1460
Rating : General

( in which the end of days has already come )

!the final battle, who:elrond, who:turgon, fandom:silmarillion, challenge:fanfic100

Comments 4

minviendha August 25 2009, 17:52:58 UTC

You should write more post apocalyptic things. Your descriptions of a broken world are fantastic. And I am curious about Mr. 'Ronnie' over there.

Did you change POVs, though? It was Elrond at first, and then I thought it changed to Turgon...I do like seeing you write different people, though. And the last paragraph is good.

tomboy_typist August 25 2009, 18:06:28 UTC

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It was fun to write, and there will be more. And there will be more about Ronnie.

*headdesk* this was intended to be Turgon POV only. I just tried to fix the first and fourth paragraph. Let me know if it's more consistent.

minviendha August 25 2009, 18:26:14 UTC

It is, much! Thank you, I'm glad I wasn't just weird there.

tomboy_typist August 25 2009, 18:36:45 UTC

You were not! That's why I ask you to beta-read things for me!

*points* New Ar chapter is up too.