The Final Battle. 4/? : Too Many Chiefs....

[tomboy_typist]

Who: Aredhel, Fingon, Argon, Fingolfin
What: For the love of the Silmarils, Eärendil will return from the sky and Túrin Turambar on the plains of Valinor.  Fingon throws a hissy fit and Aredhel angsts about Celegorm.
Fandom: Silmarillion
fanfic100  prompt  : 025. Strangers.
Word Count: 1316
Rating: General

Comments

[minviendha]

Oh, Fingon. You and your hissy fits. And damn, I have to feel sorry for Ar, who seems to be just getting swept along.

“Yes. The Valar have once again dispossessed the Noldor, we can't even lead our own in battle. All that we did, our deaths on the field, nothing mattered, and---”

I can't explain why I like this so much, but I do. Also 'the lethal kiss from Grond itself' and the mention of her conflicted feelings about Elwing being a descendant of Luthien. And her fears, which of course ring true with my own personal pseudocanon. Lolbias.

Keep writing, I still want to know where this is going, and badly.

[tomboy_typist]

Haha, yes, I will. I guess it's kind of the lot of the POV character to be swept along on things, the way I see it. Though I intend for her to get more proactive, soon enough.

Ah, yes, that quote. I wanted to get a bit of Fingon's rage, and to point out how the Finwean crazy did not stop at Faenor's line.

And.

The fear bits? Totally inspired by your pseudocanon, which I think makes a lot of sense. I can't have everything go right, now, can I?

....

I probably read too much Martin right now.

[minviendha]

You and me both. Seriously. I mean, what was the last fic I wrote where things went right for anyone? And of course the Finwean crazy doesn't. It goes alll the way through. It's just less obvious more of the time in some of them. And the only ones it didn't seem to touch are Finarfin and his kids, oddly.

...yaymypseudocanonishappy that you feel it is valid. XD