fic (fullmetal alchemist)

[kittu9]

title: the briefest shining of the dead
fandom: fullmetal alchemist
character/pairing: Winry Rockbell
rating: K+
wordcount: 430
summary: She tries not to remember certain things.
notes: Refers to the disastrous human transmutation, and, as such, contains references to gore. Winry Rockbell has nerves of steel. There is little you can say to

Comments

[evil_little_dog]

Very poetic. I love the imagery in this.

[kittu9]

Thank you for your comment!

[evil_little_dog]

You're welcome. I've sent both stories out as recs to some of my friends, as well.

[ishte]

I love your word choices. Especially I liked Ed's 'uncommon and fathomless eyes'

[kittu9]

Thank you!

[r_kimono]

Oh, Winry. So determined and as strong as the boys, in her different way. I love the shifts from the blissful summers as children to the sadness after their parents are gone to the horror after the transmutation - it makes this piece very effective, and her emotions very tangible.

[kittu9]

Thank you!

Winry has such astonishing depth, I feel like I spend paragraphs trying to do her credit.

[r_kimono]

She would deserve all of your paragraphs.