unfinished assignment

[tom_servo]

I'm really having a problem finishing this...

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I heard your voice go out across the air
waves, quiet as a whisper beamed toward
my ear. And if you asked, I’d come out there
as fast as wings can carry, too slowly
to see you up, but quick enough to hear
your breath; asleep, at peace and dreaming.

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[tom_servo]

I'm not sure where I want it to go: I know that it doesn't feel stationed well enough yet, and it needs at least one more event to make it...shapely. Plus, it has to be at least 2 stanzas of iambic pentameter, so that too adds to my concern.