Comments | tolovesomebody: fic advent, december 20th for <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/wintermachine">wintermachine</a></strong>

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fic advent, december 20th for wintermachine

Dec 22, 2011 22:02

Title: Too Little Too Late
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Addison/Derek
Summary: Mascara tinted tears streak down her cheeks as the reality that Derek is leaving starts to settle in.

( Are you thinking of him? )

ship: addison/derek, fic advent, adult themes

Comments 5

flipflop_diva December 23 2011, 08:15:51 UTC

:(

Jeri! You're killing me with this! In a good way, but still. Wow. So much angst and bitterness and my poor Addie.

But I love this. I hate it (in a good way), but love it. I can also see it totally happening. I think you captured them really, really well.

Now I can't wait till it's my fic gift day :)

nursebadass December 24 2011, 00:09:00 UTC

It's all wintermachine's fault. She wanted angsty sex. I delivered.

winter_machine December 23 2011, 13:10:35 UTC

Jer, why would you think I would enjoy depressing, angst-laden, already-over-but-somehow-still-in-bed Addek? OH WAIT IT IS BECAUSE YOU ARE BRILLIANT. Thank you thank you for my fic advent. Just what I needed on this surprisingly balmy morning: to remember that still loving Addek is like getting punched in the face over and over again. Plus, we all know you're one of the fic queens of angry sex. And the sheets exchange - I died. Your Derek voice is so spot on, which makes me worry about you ONLY A LITTLE. Seriously though, thank you for this. Love. My. Present.

nursebadass December 24 2011, 00:10:42 UTC

This comment totally made my morning. You crack me up. I'm glad you enjoyed it- and I'm sorry I scare you with Derek? I'm glad that I can nail him though, because he makes me nervous to write.

permeated_words February 8 2012, 20:59:12 UTC

Absofuckinglutely brilliant. I want to quote all my favourite parts here but that would mean me quoting the whole thing so I've nixed that idea and instead I will just ramble for a few moments about how much I want to have sex with this.

I love the whole concept of Derek trying to "reclaim Addison" or whatever it was that he was doing. And I have to agree with Mags, Derek was so scary but so accurate.

He pushes her down to the bed, tears the fabric of her shirt from her body, buttons flying and skidding across the floor. Everything he does is hard, emotionless. It’s not about love, it’s not about restoring their relationship. It’s about him making sure that he’s the last one that touches her, the last person to fuck her in their bed. On their sheets ( ... )