Comments | tolovesomebody: The Fall Will Kill You

nursebadass in tolovesomebody

The Fall Will Kill You

Dec 08, 2011 17:15

Fandom: Once Upon A Time (I know, right?)
Rating: PG
Character: Mary Margaret
Summary: Believing in the possibility of a happy ending is a very powerful thing. Angsty.

( And they lived happily ever after... )

fandom: once upon a time, character: mary margaret

Comments 14

ahkna December 8 2011, 23:39:13 UTC

This is so lovely. Very real and very keeping with Mary Margaret's mindset at the end of the episode.

nursebadass December 8 2011, 23:56:57 UTC

♥ thank you so much for the feedback and for letting me stress about writing this. It's much appreciated.

heartsways December 8 2011, 23:43:03 UTC

Agreed. There's a bittersweet quality to this that is really lovely.

Finally a decent writer tackles this fandom. Write some more, woman. I need it.

nursebadass December 8 2011, 23:56:27 UTC

Well, thank you for encouraging me to do it. I will most definitely try to write again when the inspiration strikes (which may be soon since I can't seem to quit this and I'm about to be off of work for 10 days...).

Thank you for the feedback! :)

miss_peg December 9 2011, 01:29:17 UTC

Oh sad. She's worthy of his love and he hers, they just need to both get past the hurdles. Such horrible hurdles. Lovely piece. :)

nursebadass December 9 2011, 02:18:34 UTC

I need them together. And thanks for reading and reviewing. My first, so I was a little nervous :)

miss_peg December 9 2011, 11:13:03 UTC

I'm with you on that!!! So lovely together <3

Ooh, well, it was a rather good piece for a first, so you should be very happy with it! I've seen plenty of firsts in various capacities...and this is well above many!!!

bee_1103 December 9 2011, 02:23:17 UTC

So beautiful! Sad but wonderful! Does anyone else just want to snuggle her until she feels better?

nursebadass December 9 2011, 03:21:44 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am definitely not the snuggly type and I felt so bad for her. I was kind of mad at Charming, tbh.

bee_1103 December 9 2011, 05:17:38 UTC

Agreed, though, him being all honorable now that he "remembers" Kathryn kind of make me love him a little bit more too, despite his crushing Mary Margaret like he did. It makes me see the inner prince, in the same way he agreed to marry Abigail in this eppy and went back to her at the end of Snow Falls because of that arrangement. So idk, mad? Yes. Still desperately love him? Completely. =P Anywho, loved this post-ep wrap to MM's feelings, it really was lovely.

litlover12 December 9 2011, 03:55:58 UTC

Well done! Very insightful.

nursebadass December 9 2011, 20:31:23 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :)