Title: Another Four Pains… in One Night Author: Kortirion Characters: Young Aragorn and Young Halbarad Rating: G…ish Source: Pre Ring War Disclaimer: Tolkien’s characters, Kortirion’s incidents and inferences.
It was quite interesting to continue the tale all on one thought, but divided into 100 word pieces - the cuts were really quite difficult, it would have been very easy to write at least double for each one!
Halbarad - falling under Aragorn's charms as we speak! ;-P
“Hurts… y’know… “ muttered Aragorn, “…like stomach-ache, when I think of them… like a kick in the guts…
Poor lad, I'm sure it must have, like being sent away to boarding school but even worse.
I can imagine them both trying to live that last scene down for a while... with a degree of muttering amongst some along the lines of "You know what they say about elves..."
...like being sent away to boarding school but even worse.
Exactly! I think you encapsulated their feelings very well.
As to the latter... well, you know what these elves get up to, charm you, get into your pants and leave you with nothing but the taste of damp grass and the scent of warm leaves on your hands.
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*Snort* Poor Halbarad - he'll never live this down :>)
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Halbarad - falling under Aragorn's charms as we speak! ;-P
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And Aragorn did.
So much is said with so little, here. I enjoyed these scenes.
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Of course in my AU view I wouldn't end it. *g*
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Poor lad, I'm sure it must have, like being sent away to boarding school but even worse.
I can imagine them both trying to live that last scene down for a while... with a degree of muttering amongst some along the lines of "You know what they say about elves..."
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Exactly! I think you encapsulated their feelings very well.
As to the latter... well, you know what these elves get up to, charm you, get into your pants and leave you with nothing but the taste of damp grass and the scent of warm leaves on your hands.
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