Sell - A Training Agenda - Redoux

[engarian]

I wasn't really happy with what I posted last week for "sell" and felt that I could write something that had a bit more bite.  So here it is, my redo of sell - A Training Agenda - Reduox.

Title:  A Training Agenda

Author:  Erulisse (one L)

Characters/Pairing:  Aragorn, Gandalf

Rating:  G

Warnings:  None

Book/Source:  Lord of the Rings

Summary:

Comments

[lindahoyland]

I liked the first version, but enjoyed this even more.

[engarian]

Thanks, Linda. I felt I had lost my focus and my edge by the time I went through four revisions on the other one. I like this one much more.

- Erulisse (one L)

[someplacetobe]

I like this a lot more than the first. This feels cleaner.

[engarian]

Thank you, I'm much happier with it also. I think it has its immediacy back now. I appreciate hearing that others also feel that way.

- Erulisse (one L)

[dreamflower02]

*nods* It very well could have been this way...

[engarian]

Thanks for commenting. The tale of years states that Aragorn became friends with Gandalf one year before he goes south, so why not a push from an Istari/Maia? :-)

- Erulisse (one L)