I love/shudder to see how you make each successive gesture so cruel and evil by attributing it to the proper character. -Shivers- Wonderful, chilling work!
Thanks so much. My wonderful writers board pushed me to do better, and all of you got the third re-write and the one that had the most impact. I'm happy with it.
Thank you so much, someplacetobe. I am enjoying these little walks with Melkor and hope that I can keep exploring his character for the remainder of the "facial expressions" prompts. We'll have to see, but I have hopes :-)
Whee, more Melkor. I do hope you can continue with his character throughout the facial expressions challenge, it's delightful to see him pop up regularly.
That is my goal. I enjoy writing about Melkor, it's so different than my usual focus on the Noldorin men. I think the facial expressions challenge was just custom made for my evil side :-) I'm delighted that you're enjoying these so far.
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I like his dialogue here--quite concise. =)
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