Raised Eyebrow - Setting the Stage

Oct 05, 2011 16:44

Title: Setting the Stage - The Dagor-nuin-Giliath ( Read more... )

author: erulisse, character: melkor, challenge: faces: raised eyebrow

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almaheart October 6 2011, 01:02:32 UTC
I love/shudder to see how you make each successive gesture so cruel and evil by attributing it to the proper character. -Shivers- Wonderful, chilling work!

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engarian October 6 2011, 09:11:53 UTC
Thanks so much. My wonderful writers board pushed me to do better, and all of you got the third re-write and the one that had the most impact. I'm happy with it.

- Erulisse (one L)

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lindahoyland October 6 2011, 01:28:14 UTC
A very vivid response to the prompt.

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engarian October 6 2011, 09:17:59 UTC
Thanks, Linda. I am enjoying my short sojourns to the "dark side".

- Erulisse (one L)

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someplacetobe October 6 2011, 13:07:42 UTC
Oooh. Very nicely done!

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engarian October 6 2011, 14:16:38 UTC
Thank you so much, someplacetobe. I am enjoying these little walks with Melkor and hope that I can keep exploring his character for the remainder of the "facial expressions" prompts. We'll have to see, but I have hopes :-)

- Erulisse (one L)

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huinare October 6 2011, 18:07:29 UTC
Whee, more Melkor. I do hope you can continue with his character throughout the facial expressions challenge, it's delightful to see him pop up regularly.

I like his dialogue here--quite concise. =)

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engarian October 6 2011, 20:00:01 UTC
That is my goal. I enjoy writing about Melkor, it's so different than my usual focus on the Noldorin men. I think the facial expressions challenge was just custom made for my evil side :-) I'm delighted that you're enjoying these so far.

- Erulisse (one L)

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