Dragon Challenge; The Secret Lives of Parents.

Apr 20, 2011 23:23

Author; curiouswombat
Title; The Secret Lives of Parents.
Source: LotR
Characters; Éowyn's family.
Rating G.
For the 'Dragons' challenge.

Disclaimer: The characters in this story do not belong to me, but are being used for amusement only, and all rights remain with the estate of JRR Tolkien.

The Secret Lives of Parents )

author: curiouswombat, challenge: fell beasts: dragons

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engarian April 20 2011, 22:53:04 UTC
How cute! I think your second sentence should start with "Eowyn" rather than "Arwen", however. This was a very nice turn on the dragon theme.

- Erulisse (one L)

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curiouswombat April 20 2011, 23:02:38 UTC
Thank you - and thank you! It still amazes me how often I can read the word that's meant to be there, rather than the one that is...

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engarian April 20 2011, 23:12:33 UTC
NP - That's why the "edit" option exists :-) I've used it a lot over the past few posts...

- Erulisse (one L)

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azalaisdep April 20 2011, 23:17:24 UTC
I love the children's one-upmanship; and that it takes Aragorn to tell them that Mummy once slew one of Middle-earth's greatest evils! And yes, the thought of "worms" like Smaug might well have led to some unpleasant recollections...

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curiouswombat April 21 2011, 07:31:53 UTC
Thank you - that wyrme/Wormtongue thing came to me almost immediately and it occurred to me that it also would to Éowyn - even in a totally unconnected moment of children being children.

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alphien April 21 2011, 00:24:27 UTC
Very cute look. Children often don't seem to see their parents as anything besides parents--no social life whatsoever. I love how you captured this reality here.

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curiouswombat April 21 2011, 07:34:26 UTC
Thank you - children really don't think of parents ever having done anything before they, themselves, were born - I'm so pleased that you think I captured that, here.

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kortirion April 21 2011, 00:32:13 UTC
Hee - love the last line!

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curiouswombat April 21 2011, 07:38:42 UTC
Thank you - goodness knows what Eldarion would come up with next. I rather think the trump line "But MY daddy is the KING' would have already been over-used....

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lindahoyland April 21 2011, 07:21:45 UTC
I just loved this!

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curiouswombat April 21 2011, 07:39:39 UTC
Thank you - it was a nice one to write.

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