Water Challenge: The Sea - Lost

Feb 14, 2011 17:57

Title: Lost
Author: SilverStarSpray
Characters/Pairing: Elwing
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Book/Source: Silmarillion
Disclaimer: I don’t own Middle-earth, however much I’d like to live there.

Lost )

author: silverstarspray, character: elwing, challenge: water: sea

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azalaisdep February 17 2011, 08:51:11 UTC
So much descriptive power packed into a few words, especially "dark but for the blinding, brilliant light of the cursed Jewel"... Bravo!

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clodia_metelli February 17 2011, 23:45:48 UTC
Oooooh. That is such a powerful way to capture that moment. Perfectly done!

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blslarner February 18 2011, 01:03:10 UTC
At least her loss in the end became a triumph, no matter how bitter the cost! To see her anguish become the flight of the sea bird with the Silmaril upon her breast as she seeks to rejoin her husband--so well expressed!

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