After the Rain - Puddle

Jan 25, 2011 17:59

Title: After the Rain
Author: Linda Hoyland
Characters/Pairing: Aragorn,Halbarad
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Book/Source: LOTR book-verse
Disclaimer - These characters all belong to the estate of J.R.R. Tolkien. This story was written for pleasure and not for financial gain.

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author: lindahoyland, challenge: water: puddles, character: aragorn, character: halbarad

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curiouswombat January 25 2011, 18:22:16 UTC
Lovely What a good last line - it says it all, really!

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lindahoyland January 25 2011, 18:24:12 UTC
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.It was fun to write.

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someplacetobe January 25 2011, 18:33:04 UTC
I was trying to think of something to say other than 'lovely!' but that's such a perfect word to sum up the imagery within the story and that last line.

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lindahoyland January 31 2011, 04:02:42 UTC
Thank you, I'm so pleased you liked this. It was one that wrote itself!

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azalaisdep January 25 2011, 22:25:50 UTC
Mmm, the smell of warm earth after rain - you describe that so vividly.

I'm reminded of our family holiday two summers ago when I watched my little children building sandcastles on the Normandy Landing beaches of June 1944, wondered if that were somehow disrespectful, and then thought "no, because surely that's what it was all for?" I'm glad Aragorn can keep that perspective.

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lindahoyland January 31 2011, 04:07:08 UTC
Thank you, I'm pleased this workrf for you and thank you for sharing your holiday memory which is perfectly what this drabble is about.

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ex_lbilover January 26 2011, 00:45:02 UTC
Aww, that's such a lovely hopeful image of the children playing, and even better to imagine Aragorn's smile. Thank you!

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lindahoyland January 31 2011, 04:08:29 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm pleased you enjoyed my drabble.

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kortirion January 26 2011, 00:59:45 UTC
This made me smile as Aragorn smiled... - you've created a lovely vision of a duty well done.

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lindahoyland January 31 2011, 04:09:48 UTC
Thank you. I'm pleased you were able to smile with Aragorn.

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