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Thorns

Nov 03, 2010 21:12

Title: Thorns
Author: Jay of Lasgalen
Characters: Elrohir, Erestor
Rating: G
Disclaimer: Tolkien's; not mine.

Summary: Elrond's sons can be rather accident-prone ...
For the Potter's Wheel challenge, 'Throw'.

( Thorns )

character: elrohir, challenge: potter's wheel - throw, author: jay_of_lasgalen, character: erestor

Comments 16

grey_wonderer November 3 2010, 21:28:47 UTC

Ouch!

jay_of_lasgalen November 4 2010, 10:43:09 UTC

I know. Poor Elladan! His pride will be hurt as well :)

azalaisdep November 3 2010, 21:37:59 UTC

Glorious. "I swear it is half warg" - snort! Love the timing of the last line, especially that devastating pause...

jay_of_lasgalen November 4 2010, 10:44:19 UTC

Thank you! This one was fun to write. I could imagine the scene so clearly :>)

kortirion November 3 2010, 23:00:05 UTC

Hee hee - good choice of 'throw'!

jay_of_lasgalen November 4 2010, 10:46:01 UTC

I was pondering various uses of the word while driving home last night when I was suddenly hit by inspiration. It's about time, too ...

sally_daer November 3 2010, 23:03:56 UTC

Ufffff. Poor him!

jay_of_lasgalen November 4 2010, 10:47:03 UTC

Yes, poor Elladan. And Elrohir is going to laugh and laugh at him :)

lindahoyland November 4 2010, 17:52:49 UTC

Poor Elladan! A great use of the prompt.

jay_of_lasgalen November 5 2010, 14:41:50 UTC

Thank you :) I feel rather sorry for Elladan here :/