Prompt - Pebble - Author Elwen

[elwenlj]

Title - Tumbled
Character - Frodo
Rating - Gen

Comments

[engarian]

This is just lovely and gentle.

- Erulisse (one L)

[elwenlj]

Thank you. :)

[elwenlj]

I'm glad I got the imagery across. Thank you.

[shirebound]

The imagery is beautiful here.

[elwenlj]

I only had to close my eyes to see the scene. I'm pleased you saw it too.

[baranduin]

I love the emotional heft of your descriptiveness :-)

[elwenlj]

Thanks. I'm pleased it came across to you.

[hhimring]

The hinted parallel between the wearing away of the rock and Frodo's fate is done very well.

[elwenlj]

Thanks. I was worried I'd been a bit heavy handed.