TRIPTYCH

May 14, 2011 23:25



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!fiction, *2am, #yongseowoon, *c.n.blue, one-shot, *snsd

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kellneriner May 15 2011, 07:56:45 UTC
OMG WOW. WOW. A sweet lighthearted happy story from you! Me, is very much happy! *jumps around* IDK what it is with you good writers but when I read fics like this I always feel like I'm IN the story, like in this case like I'm in the party and watching Hyun going about with my own eyes. And I love the airy, happy feeling I got when I read the story.

This also feels highly plausible, mainly cos you adhered to their true characteristics. Like how Jinwoon is into Hyun but thinks of Yonghwa as his hyung, hence the 'He looks up at the taller boy, who catches his gaze and waves energetically at him.'.

Love it. Thanks.

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tokyospine May 18 2011, 07:25:43 UTC
hahaha. it surprised me too, but i give all props to the presence of sunny. it would be really difficult to make this sad with her there tbh.

i like how your interpretation of it is that jinwoon thinks of him as his hyung, even though i imagine it'd be reversed irl because jinwoon is technically his sunbae. so in this case, it'd make more sense if yonghwa deferred to him. ah, idk~ koreans and their rankings.

thanks! :] (bethany!)

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curcol May 15 2011, 09:24:03 UTC
this fic makes me happy...^^
at first when you said 3 involved, and the summary "Maybe he'll fall in love with another girl and perhaps just as hard, but for now his heart is beating hummingbird fast against his chest." I was like, 'No, Please don't break Yong's heart."
but it turned out to be this sweet.^^
I love it when you go fluffy, because your writing is very good, and when you write angst, it means a very good angst, and that affects me, being depressed and sad and all...

anyway, agree with kellneriner, it's highly plausible. so in-character.

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tokyospine May 18 2011, 07:26:26 UTC
l o l.

yeah, i figured most people would jump to that conclusion since it's the main theme of what i've been writing nowadays.

thank you!

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silverbaby13579 May 15 2011, 11:13:57 UTC
omg I'm so excited because this is the closest to fluff I've read from you! :P
I also thought the "spoiler' was referring to Yong, because most of your fics do end up that way, (well, the recent ones) hehe.
Taengoo's being all protective and "Asian"~ lmao, I love this whole piece. It's interesting to read Yong "hitting on" Hyun since the dynamics of that type of interaction are quite difficult (for me) to imagine. Ahh he should just whisk her away forever in dreamland <3
Thanks for such a light-hearted, happy gem today :)

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silverbaby13579 May 15 2011, 11:37:31 UTC
(okay sorry I know I've done this way too many times where I comment extra because I'm not thorough enough in my first comment - either that or I double post lol)

So was your inspiration the recent Yongseo interaction (aka the first public one since WGM :O) and the fact that the positive mood on forums isn't one that's tooooo "delusional", as in, "they're not awkward" but no one's saying "they're dating for sure", hence making it more "natural" or easy to write such a fluffy, giddy story? :D

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tokyospine May 18 2011, 07:32:26 UTC
LOL, yonghwa wasn't really hitting on seobb. actually, when i re-read what i wrote, i immediately wondered if people would interpret their interactions a little bit more than i had intended because i certainly (and unintentionally) left room there for it to be taken that way ( ... )

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zealous2002 May 15 2011, 13:52:40 UTC
Other than her sisters and parents, would she gets a kisses from others???
Now I'm totally curious.. kekeke

zealous

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tokyospine May 18 2011, 07:34:54 UTC
haha, are you asking me whether she'd get kisses in my story-verse or irl? couldn't tell you if the latter but the former? no, just sunny (at the request of taeyeon and tiffany). and sure, maybe her other sisters might give her a smooch just to piss her off. X)

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blubtrflynflats May 15 2011, 15:35:46 UTC
Ow.

'My ideal type, he thinks with a little mirth and a little sadness, is my friend, Seohyun, and she's not for me.'

That hit me hard. :( I could totally picture the scene in my head - everything is sunny and bright during the party but one heart hurts while the other two rejoices.

Beautifully written! <3

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tokyospine May 18 2011, 07:36:01 UTC
:( yeah, his was kind of sad. but i'm actually kind of glad that they get along irl ... even though you have to wonder sometimes ... ><

anyway, thank you for reading! ♥ i really appreciate it. :]

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