NOT SCIENCE, JUST US

Apr 29, 2011 01:27



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!fiction, #yongseo, *c.n.blue, one-shot, *snsd

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curcol April 29 2011, 10:01:47 UTC
can you feel my heart beat?
really, reading a kissing scene was always heart-fluttering. but you, my friend, there was shyness in her, in me, and it was so in-character, and there was addiction, a need, and a brave decision, and of course, a happy end.
but no, not infinite. like you said, "they'll never get there. It's too far, and they could be drowning." ^^

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tokyospine May 3 2011, 09:16:25 UTC
i'm still not too sure about this tbh. lol, but thank you!

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short & sweet zealous2002 April 29 2011, 10:43:38 UTC
nice, sweet & short.
can;t say it's straight to the point...
but, u really leave for our mind to think, right...
kekeke..
reading this chap concurrent with watching royal wedding give me a different feeling..
kekeke...

zealous

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Re: short & sweet tokyospine May 3 2011, 09:16:59 UTC
:)

i just watched a recap of the royal wedding, and it got me all wibbly. if only YS could be like that one day, eh? :P

thank you for reading~

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faisazali April 29 2011, 12:33:16 UTC
oh my gooddies!!
nice one shot chinggu!!
maybe because of the words you chose..
it makes the emotion more tense..
or should i say, more deep..
and i love it!!
thanks chinggu!! ^^

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tokyospine May 3 2011, 09:17:18 UTC
>< still not sure what to make of this. haha.

thank you for reading!

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silverbaby13579 April 29 2011, 15:20:10 UTC
it's gettin' hot in here yo... ^^

this is awesome, I love how the red string's loosened itself but still doing its job of binding them together. And reading this beats watching a love scene anytime, hands down lol.
As usual, your ending leaves a significant impact as I try to figure out what to make of them! I sense a hint of magic realism especially in the last few sentences and I l.o.v.e. it. It makes it feel as though..they just wish to stay where they are with each other like that, capturing that moment in still life and not having to move on and "live it out". Like a peaceful suicide. Or the juxtaposition of sex and death or something like that whoa I'm not making any sense because it's past 1 and I woke up early today, so apologies in advance if that had absolutely nothing to do with whatever you were trying to convey -_-". ^^
*In conclusion*, this piece complements Ribbon Connectivity beautifully - thank you! <3

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tokyospine May 3 2011, 09:19:50 UTC
lmao, double comment fail. ♥

anyway, thank you. this is one of those stories that i wrote, like, on a whim - but it's also one of those ones where i'm not sure if i like it or not. but thank you for reading!

and can i just say that i enjoy reading how you interpret my stuff? gives reviews a whole other dimension. at any rate, your death interpretation is particularly LOL to me. that wasn't really my intent, but again, it's an interesting take. :)

thank you, bb. ♥

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silverbaby13579 May 3 2011, 13:12:25 UTC
hehe...you're welcome? <3
I tend to spend time interpreting things because I procrastinate study, and it so happens that a lot of your stuff creates room for my musings, lol ^^.
Looking back, I notice how my interpretations of your fics tend to be slightly gloomy/didn't manage to distinguish (dark?) humour from downright dark... :O (Im' so sorry! I'm blur that way...).
Anyway, as always, I always anticipate your next! :D

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rxp080100 April 30 2011, 05:04:37 UTC
lolololol this is kind of hot...
i mean beautifully hot?
orz i suck at commenting on your fics (but it's only my own fault!)
anyway this will be favorited....

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tokyospine May 3 2011, 09:20:58 UTC
haha, i guess. hot wouldn't have been the first word i would've thought of, though. lmfao. still not sure i personally like it. D:

but thank you, thank you! ♥

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