omg i instantly love your story *A* you should continue this plot!! i mean a flashback on their days together and what would happen after their reunion *A* this is so cool!! it's not the typical hirosuke fiction that has sex or the like just to explain the romance between them. i really love this <33
Their past is full of bantering and, as they said, making everything into a competition. Their future... will be work, work and work, and maybe sometimes meeting whenever they're on the same side of the country. XD;
My first thought after reading this was: Ah, it's like that between them. I know this is an AU, but it still fitted them so well, that I would immediately believe it if someone told me they both don't know how much they actually care for and love each other. It sutites this pairing so much. Their pasts connect them and the rivalry of wanting to be better. The first lines don't give away that they know each other and I like surprises like that. They both want to forget about each other and their lingering feelings but they can't. You used few words, but you got it across nicely. It feels like the emotions are raw. <3
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You should write more of this universe ! :D
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Thank you for commenting! ♥
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My first thought after reading this was: Ah, it's like that between them.
I know this is an AU, but it still fitted them so well, that I would immediately believe it if someone told me they both don't know how much they actually care for and love each other. It sutites this pairing so much. Their pasts connect them and the rivalry of wanting to be better.
The first lines don't give away that they know each other and I like surprises like that.
They both want to forget about each other and their lingering feelings but they can't. You used few words, but you got it across nicely. It feels like the emotions are raw.
<3
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Thank you for taking time to comment so thoughtfully! I'm happy you liked it! n___n ♥
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