Shopping for Love - Aoi/Uruha - Oneshot

[tokyorockstar]

Title: Shopping for Love
Chapter: oneshot
Author: tokyorockstar 
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Romance, Fluff, Humour
Rating: PG-13
Synopsis: "I'm sorry Sir, but only one person can enter the fitting room at a time."
Warnings: Very mild implied smut
Disclaimer: I don’t own them, etc.

Shopping for Love

Uruha didn’t know how things had turned out to be like this.

Well, he did,

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Wahahaaha. Can you tell I am laughing at this? I enjoyed it so much. It so great to read such a humorous amusing piece after getting attacked by angst. Really lifts up one's spirit. Especially when it is Uruha who is the one confessing. Not just confessing but drunk blogging his love confession, hihihi.

Just some of the parts I liked:

“You read my blog?”
Aoi shrugged, extracting the cigarette from his lips and exhaling slowly.
“Occassionally.”

Aoi is such a liar, I bet he follows it diligently. LOL.

“What? You’re all embarrassed? Cuz you’e in love with me?”
At that, Uruha finally turned his gaze to meet Aoi’s eyes.
Their eyes bore into one another’s for a moment - Uruha’s slightly faltering and panicked; Aoi’s steely and confused.
And then there was understanding.
Aoi’s lips parted slightly at what he saw in those eyes. Seven years together (even though the past two didn’t include much interaction), he was fairly certain about what he saw.I love this moment of understanding. I also like how you mentioned their growing distant

[tokyorockstar]

oh...wow. i've never gotten such a long, detailed comment before. thanks so much, it means a lot to me! i agree with you; i was debating on whether to stick in the fanfiction reference or not :P though i guess i also wanted to make it seem somewhat realistic in a funny way. hmm.

thank you for reading and commenting, i'm glad you enjoyed it ♥

[tokyorockstar]

or i could probably have changed it to sth like "if this were uruha's dream" instead XD

[noctiferi]

this was brilliant :D Uru's silent despair on the sofa <3 and the scene with the sales assistant, that was so funny *g*
do you take off your shoes in Japan before entering a fitting room? :O

[tokyorockstar]

thank you! :D
yes, you've got to take off your shoes before entering a fitting room, since they are usually carpeted seperately.

[noctiferi]

ah, I see! good to know, since I'm going to Japan next month ;) so you saved me from embarassment :D

[vampire_chan04]

Oh, that was luffly, exactly what I needed right nao ♥

Aoi raised a (non-existent) eyebrow.
I cracked up. xDDD

Awesome job. I really liked it. Adding to mems~~

[tokyorockstar]

haha thankyou ♥
A/U needs more fluff these days lol

[quarrions]

this was incredibly funny and good ..

I laughed so hard ....it was long time I have read such a good thing in terms of humour genre ..I really loved it
thank you very much for writing this !!!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
*gives candies*

[tokyorockstar]

aww thank you! :D
i'm glad you enjoyed it! it's actually my first attempt at humour ROFL i'm glad i managed to get some laughs out of everyone XD

[keimaxwell]

Haha~ I liked it. Really cute and also hot~ X3

[tokyorockstar]

haha thanks! :D