Bad Day

[tokyokitty161]

I'm not sure this fic ever got uploaded to LJ. I certainly couldn't find it on any of my communities I belong to. Please enjoy it!!

Title: Bad Day
Pairing: YumichikaxIkkaku
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Smut
Summary: After one heck of a crappy day Ikkaku needs to let off some steam.

Comments

[aikoquetiful]

I don't believe anyone should comment and tell you your translations don't match up, even though I can't speak it YET I don't think you'd be doing translations for everyone if you didn't believe you were good at it. XD It was probably someone immature.

Anyway, on the fic. It sounds about like a way I would let out my frustration--writing angry Ikkaku porn. 8D And it was awesome. I love your sense of description on almost everything, and the way you wrote Ikkaku being so rash and angry definitely fits him perfectly. The fact that he was able to walk in and FINALLY see something good--Yumichika on the bed--was great. I almost thought he'd have to go running around trying to find him first what with all his bad luck. The ending was great, I can see Yumichika doing that all of the time simply because of the way he acts. You got him perfectly too.

Good job; I'm looking forward to more. (: