Love is blind, and optimistically selective the rest of the time

[tokkei_12]

Title: Love is blind, and optimistically selective the rest of the time
Pairings: Hanchul, minor Kyumin and Eunhae
Genre: Fluff, romance, humor
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
Summary: AU. In which Hankyung and Heechul fail at dating.

And here's the commentary version.

Comments

[omoikkiri]

(...dangit, I left a long(er) comment but LJ appears to have eaten it D:)

I haven't read many Suju fics recently, but I'm so so so glad that I read this one! It's so funny and awesome and I don't even know a;ldsgkl;am ♥!

My favorite part was Hankyung letting out a battle cry, but then in the second half there were SO MANY hilarious parts (not cause of bias, but because we see all the unintended actions and stuff) ahaha SO CUTE XD ♥ And you carried off the narrative tone really well. Loved it~

[tokkei_12]

Ah, I do hate it when LJ does that :P I have no idea where the battle cry part came from XD But as Heechul is my bias, I have a soft spot for the second part (and him being adorkable)~ Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for reading and commenting! ^.^

[ashheemi]

omg i loved it! i loved their super failingness.... so cute! i love hanchul. and i love your writing style. you`re so funny. and it`s amazing to read.

[tokkei_12]

They fail so much it's not even...well, actually, it is funny XD Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for the comment and the compliment! ^.^

[amaelamin_]

squee!

i love it i love it. showing how they're equally as useless was genius and the part about heechul getting stuck to the branch by his sweater had me sniggering irl. it's been so long since i've read good happy hanchul, oy.

and i know i have rather rudely left our awkward introductions in the lurch. please forgive me /prostrates self.

ah, you've made my day with this.

[tokkei_12]

Heechul being a, ahem, floozy is rather common, so I like to think that he can be just as adorkable~ Not sure where the sweater thing came from, but I needed him to stay in place, and yeah. And there really is too much angsty Hanchul...

Forgiven :) *glomps you* Glad you enjoyed this, and thanks for the comment! ^.^

[dilovesyunjae]

THEY ARE TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAHHHH!!!!!

[tokkei_12]

I do rather enjoy the idea of Hanchul being adorkable~ Thanks for commenting! ^.^

[ink_river10]

This was so wonderful that I cannot even make the right words come out to express it! (mostly because I am still half asleep) but YAY this is wonderful! I love it so much! I had no idea through Hankyung's piece that Heechul was also flailing and awkward too! AWWWWW SO MUCH LOOOOVE!

[tokkei_12]

Hankyung's more often portrayed as the adorkable one, so I thought that it'd only be fair if Heechul failed just as much~ Thanks for commenting! ^.^ *drowns in all the love*