Mad About You - EliXander & SooBum - U-KISS - Chapter 4

[tokidokiko]

Title: Mad About You
Author: tokidokiko
Genre: AU, Comedy, Romance
Rating: PG14
Pairings: Both Main - Soohyun/Kibum & Eli/Alexander
Character Summary: Eli is the so-called "playboy". Soohyun is the gym trainer. Alexander is the towel boy. Kibum is the wannabe "Mr. Muscle Man". Kevin is the friendly guy. Kiseop is the clumsy guy. And Dongho is the

Comments

[anca_chan]

First off, I had already started laughing from the chapter summary. And as I got along with the actual story, I laughed even more.

Eli shivered, taking his order.
"Now you're just doing that to freak me out." -> I could totally see Alexander doing that in real life as well.

And lol, Kibum's nose is not big. XD Just pointy. I don't know why everyone says that Kibum and his brother look alike, I don't think they do. Kibum looks more Japanese, in my opinion.

Can't wait to see what happens on their 'date'. And please, let Eli and Xander at least hug awkwardly or something. <3

[allyouhaveisme]

kwahahahha omg alexander and dongho being dorks in the start got me :')

xander's such a creeper. a good sort of creeper. i think. heh heh fret not eli alexander's just perving on you like he always does.

and oh soohyun, you scheming, scheming man you. i foresee kibummie having problems with his bike B)

[geeliarmpithair]

this chapter was really good~ alexander blinking vnjrlkegöjz what to do.

Alexander smiled and laughed. "Yea, 'cuz you're so handsome," he said flirtatiously, and gave Eli another wink.
alexanderrr what was that one? and cracked up at dongho and alexander's part.

kibum/soohyun's not bad either. keep writing!

[saikia2]

kekeke~ awww so kawaii!~ LOVE IT~ MORE PLZ!

[hinaxhini]

lolol Kibum and his big nose X'D

This is so lovely ~Please continue >-<