[Fic] Dictionary of Difficult Words

[tokidoki_hime]

Woo, first piece for 8059smutweek  /o/

and wtf, my writing is getting worse again OTL

Title: Dictionary of Difficult Words
Prompt: Words
Rating: NC -17
Word Count: 2148
Warnings: Uhm...a short bit of smut, language and...that's about it.
Summary: There are...a lot of words I find difficult to say. Like they get stubbornly caught on the grooves of your teeth, flapping

Comments

[morgrix]

That was beautiful! In the end, I was so nervous that I thought that I had to tell you to put angst in the warning! I was about to cry! Thank God you put that "Wait!"!

[tokidoki_hime]

eeeek, alfkjs; maybe I should have put angst in the warning anyway! D:

Anyway, glad you liked it, thanks for reading! <3

[dicks]

Oooohh this is beautifully written. It's not easy to write from first-person narration without being ooc but you did it amazingly bb <3

And the ending was purrfect <3

[tokidoki_hime]

Haa, thanks so very much, I'm so glad I pulled off the first person for you /is always nervous about FPOV OTL

Thanks for reading and enjoying! >u< ♥

[noodlesoother]

G-go Gokudera! Tell him how you feel! D:

Um, anyway, I really enjoyed this. It was a neat style. You did a nice job writing first person Gokudera.

[tokidoki_hime]

Haha xD

Thanks so much, glad you liked! ♥

[mochalatt3]

This was awesome. You captured Gokudera's voice perfectly and I love the theme you worked around because it describes someone as emotionally stunted as him to a T lol.

[tokidoki_hime]

ffff yeah, poor Gokudera OTL

Thanks so much for reading, I'm really happy you liked it! <3

[melissa_42]

;__;

I loved it--you captured Gokudera's voice beautifully!

[tokidoki_hime]

akjfls /dries those tears! D:

Thanks so much duckie! <33