[Fic] Nocturne no.2, Opus 9/2

[tokidoki_hime]

Uhm...hard to explain why I can't stop writing horribly angsty stuff these days.

Who knows.

Side note; the playlist I put together for this is kinda...bizarre.

Title: Nocturne no.2, Opus 9/2
Pairing/Characters: Gokudera's mother.
Warnings: PG-13; mild situations.
Words: 4300
Summary: He enters her life from the shadows of her recitals, burrowing his way

Comments

[dtn]

orz ...i feel my soul shattering

This was just so beautifully written and so heartbreaking ;__; I just love how you wrote Gokudera's mother even with the lack of appearances by her in the actual series.

Anyways, an awesome read, I like your writing style a lot ♥ Hay Amano, Gokudera's mother needs a name ;A;

[tokidoki_hime]

A-ack- /pieces your soul back together

Thank you so very much, really...I have a very strong image of what she must have been like and I'm glad you liked my interpretation of her character. /humbled

Again, thank you! ♥ You're telling me...it's only a name, Amano, come on! ;A;

[lcatraz]

This was so gorgeous I cried. Q_Q I love the way you wrote the conplicated relationship between Gokudera's father and his mother and his famiglia, and, and, and, something about. Passion. And stuff. I don't know! I felt it in my heart, okay?! XD Oh, and, by the way (and this is why I'm replying, not adding my own comment), Gokudera's mother's name is Lavina. Shows up in the specials of one of the volumes way, way later on. :D I know this thread is old, so you might not see this, but I thought I ought to...uh...let you know? :) Love the fic, peace out!

[teruame]

Wow...just...wow...Gokudera's mother shines so wonderfully in these words. You gave her a lot of justice, alright. ;__;

You also brought forth so much of the details from what one can think of that happened in here, despite the terseness of the words...wonderful, comrade.

[tokidoki_hime]

Golly, thank you so very much, your words are really very kind. /bows

[onna_sannomiya]

Poignant and heartbreaking without being too sentimental. Particularly loved how the mood of the fic is established by the music Hayato-chan's mother plays, from start to end.
The story of Hayato-chan's mother never fails to make me sad, considering how the mafia destroyed her life when all she did was love the wrong person a little too much. As expected, you did a terrific job of fleshing her out from what little we know of her. It's really uncanny how Hayato-chan is so similar to her, not only in looks but in the way they both love with their whole hearts. Again, hats off to your writing talent!

[tokidoki_hime]

;akldfjkoes th-thank you so very much, you're really too kind. I'm so glad you picked up on the music throughout, it means so much to me for inexplicable reasons. The story is heart-breaking for me too and I'm glad you enjoyed my interpretation ♥

[dicks]

This is beautifully written and somewhat poetic. I love it.

[tokidoki_hime]

Thank you so very much! It means a lot coming from someone whose own writing I adore. ♥

Why am I not the first comment on this.

[ipinzilla]

I think I've told you a thousand times over about how beautiful your writing is, the imagery, the metaphors, the characterization; I'm not going to bother you with that this time.

But my lord, my goodness, I heard 'Gokudera' and 'mother' in the same line and just about combusted. I absolutely adore how you've made her come to life, in all her beauty and hopes and dreams and --

She watches him grow in bits and pieces, in stained glass windows of youth.

^^^ This has got to be my favorite line. Ever. Just -- oh my goodness, it fits, it fits, and it hurts so good and my lord, she's such a strong and gorgeous woman, her love just surpasses anything I've ever read, and her misery and longing is just heartbreaking.

And when I heard Chopin's Etude Opus 10 no. 3, I just about had a mental breakdown. My goodness, you wonderful, terrible, wonderful woman. ♥

Never stop writing. Please. ♥

Re: Why am I not the first comment on this.

[tokidoki_hime]

I wonder if you know how much I look forward to your comments. I sit in front of my computer and grin to myself like some kind of child, overjoyed and unable to hide it.

Being a Chopin lover myself, I somewhat project that onto her...and Gokudera, admittedly, but I feel his style suits them both well; the minor pieces are poignant, heartbreaking and so free, and the major's are so cheerful, or peaceful. His music is limitless to me, but the feel in every piece he wrote is so strong I cannot help but love him.

I am beyond thankful that you enjoyed this because really, I do look forward to your comments and approval above almost anyone else. So thank you. ♥