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tohoginka32

[Shinee] Middlemen | #5

Dec 05, 2010 04:41

Five: Trips

The thing about Taemin is that he would want nothing more than to wake up every morning next to Kibum.

When Taemin stretches up on his elbows that morning, flipping his bangs out of his eyes, the blanket sliding down from his bare chest, he stares at Kibum’s sleeping form next to him, naked save for the sheer cotton of the blanket ( Read more... )

shinee!, onho!, taekey!, jongyu!

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whatyoudoing09 December 4 2010, 20:48:29 UTC

Spot <3

tohoginka32 December 4 2010, 20:50:55 UTC

That was fast <333 :D All yours babe.

whatyoudoing09 December 4 2010, 22:08:08 UTC

OMFG JINKI NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I LOVE THIS
BUT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T DIE!
JJONG NEEDS TO SEE SENSE BEFORE YOU DIE!

tohoginka32 December 5 2010, 03:48:11 UTC

Tis a mystery til the next chapter. <3
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

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personified December 4 2010, 21:05:32 UTC

omfg spot!

tohoginka32 December 4 2010, 21:07:17 UTC

Of course <3

personified December 4 2010, 23:07:55 UTC

WAIT LIKE. LIKE. DID. JINKI DIE. NO. LIKE. OMFG. I WAS. UH. WHA. I DON'T EVEN. UHHH. BRAIN BROKE DOWN. WHAAAAAA.

tohoginka32 December 5 2010, 03:49:10 UTC

Tries to fix your brain o______o
Thank you for reading and commenting :D

kaybee38 December 4 2010, 21:09:02 UTC

SPOT! *flails* -------> runs to read

tohoginka32 December 4 2010, 21:16:14 UTC

LOL. Yes, yes. Spot is yours :D

longest comment I've ever left in my life... kaybee38 December 5 2010, 01:15:30 UTC

I'm not even gonna flip out, because I kNOW you didn't kill my Jinx off like that. *deep breaths* All we heard is the sound of a gunshot, and...and then Jinki hit the floor with a thud. Taemin could have shot the guy holding him, and Jinki could've fainted for all we know. Yeah. that's what happened. Jinx fainted right? Whew.

Ok, there are SO MANY things I love about this fic I don't even know where to start.

First there's Key talking about Taemin's hair...

“I wanna find out if the carpets match the drapes.”

And then explaining to Minho how he's gonna thank him...

“Because I just found out that Taemin was making me breakfast and I want to thank him by fucking him senseless across this counter top.”

Then the seamless hint of TofuHo at the restaurant had me bouncing up and down in my seat in anticipation.

Then this whole thing...

“They’re just small. That’s. I mean. I can’t wear these ( ... )

one more thing... kaybee38 December 5 2010, 01:18:47 UTC

If you don't update this fic within the next 48 hours, I.WILL.FIND.YOU.

( ... )

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a_life_defiant December 4 2010, 21:28:43 UTC

OMFG!!! *jumps out of chair*

SPOT

tohoginka32 December 4 2010, 21:32:31 UTC

LOL, Minho's fangirl face. We meet again. Of course, of course. Spot is soooo yours <3

a_life_defiant December 5 2010, 04:14:12 UTC

he he heh, yep! Here I am!! forEVAH your fangirl XD

OMG, where do I even start.....aish...

When Taemin stretches up on his elbows that morning, flipping his bangs out of his eyes, the blanket sliding down from his bare chest, he stares at Kibum’s sleeping form next to him, naked save for the sheer cotton of the blanket over his waist, curving up his buttocks and calves as he continues to drift into his sleep on his stomach.

Now THAT is some killer imagery to start out with. mmm......

Before he knew it, his black, bowl shaped hair was being dyed a color stuck between brown and red, auburn at best, straightened and lengthened with similar shaded extensions.

BAM, upgraded.....and into and even sexier beast than before *drools*

Taemin hates the sound of Tamayama’s groans and grunts as he pushes into Taemin, sweat trickling down the side of his face and burning the patches of Taemin’s skin where it lands. He’s grinding his teeth, gripping onto the sofa as he tries to balance himself despite the continuous rocking from behind ( ... )

tohoginka32 December 5 2010, 04:40:00 UTC

That whole Pocky stick was actually inspired by the Jongkey vid. And yes, of course I was going to make it hotter what with Jonghyun being replaced by Taemin and they're lack of clothing and KISSING instead of teasing the crowd...I just. Yeah. :D I am evil. HAHA

LOL Upgrade. That just made me LOL for a good minute.

The orders, yes! One of the main points of the chap despite the sex! HAHAHA I'm glad you saw what i did thurrr~

And TOFUHO...I don't even know. Let's just wait for the next chap. HAHAHAHAHAHA

I knew your comment would be filled with win. I JUST KNEW IT!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. ♥

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runawaylane December 4 2010, 21:38:02 UTC

omg they shot him? o__________o ( ... )

runawaylane December 4 2010, 21:39:10 UTC

i can imagine this scene being played out irl because we all know dubulge is um, forever existing :D

tohoginka32 December 4 2010, 21:45:05 UTC

I would be crazy to write this without the dubulge ninjaing its way in there :D

Thank you so much for quoting and for commenting. Silent or not, I love everyone who takes the time to read my stuff. So, thank you regardless. :D

runawaylane December 4 2010, 21:47:16 UTC

:D

you shouldn't be thanking me :'D i need to thank you for writing something so awesome as this. one of the best fics i ever read, no doubt.

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