Comments | todefinebeauty: less than 100 calories, whether you like it or not (Eunhyuk/Tablo)

todefinebeauty

less than 100 calories, whether you like it or not (Eunhyuk/Tablo)

Jun 15, 2010 23:46

Eunhyuk/Tablo (Super Junior/Epik High)
PG-13. 912 words.

Short and quick and inspired by salads.

( “Hyukjae.” He looks up from his molecule of a steak to meet Tablo's bemused gaze. )

pairing: eunhyuk/tablo, length: short (less than 1000), fandom: super junior, rating: pg-13, fandom: epik high

Comments 8

wobaozhewo June 16 2010, 07:31:06 UTC

Me on MSN:

..... THREE LEAVES WHAT
INSECURITY OMG
TINY TOUCHES
PATS STOMACH
THAI PLACE OMG I LOVE THAI
CIGARETTES
WHAT
WHAT
AJFEWJFPA:IWOEJFP:AEFA:WHUT
OH SHIT CIGARETTES
OMIGAaaaaaaaaaaah
b'awww at that end part though
but sungmin. lol bad advice

homg. I... ;; They're so tentative and Hyuk is such an00b at the whole dating thing, and Blo is so laidback and... guh. Potential. aiejfaoeidcjaowijfaoeiajfwo FOREVER. I really cannot collect myself after this. And.. that Sungmin doesn't know... about them. It's sort of paving the way for a bigger plot, no? I... anticipate seeing what you will do with this. 83 ... I will be seeing more, right? 8| ... 8)

todefinebeauty July 25 2010, 21:36:30 UTC

(replying to comments finally lol)

I love them being all uncertain but wanting and still in the tentative CLUTCHES of a new relationship~ :D but I don't think there'll be more of this, haha. Just because of the sheer number of other things I need to get moving on ;_; oh my god 10k BLANCHES AT THE THOUGHT

shockstopped June 16 2010, 09:28:48 UTC

O.O was definitely how I looked like when I saw and read the fic, lol. You write the best blohyuk on earth, seriously.
Possible of continuation of it? *hopeful* hehehe.

todefinebeauty July 25 2010, 21:37:36 UTC

Awww thank you! (Sorry about the late comment, I've been caught up with life T_T) I don't think there'll be a continuation, haha ♥ I have so many things I should be working on instead of random shortfic like this that keeps coming out instead XD

thundersquall June 16 2010, 12:24:15 UTC

Omg that exchange between Sungmin and Hyukjae. LOLING OKAY.

I've been reading your BloHyuks to get a feel for them and start on the one I promised to write you. ;___; KAI PLEASE DON'T KILL ME IF I MESS THEM UP, BECAUSE I KNOW I WILL, FML.

todefinebeauty July 25 2010, 21:46:26 UTC

I want to see more HyukMin like, always. They have so much potential!!

;_; I WOULD NEVER KILL YOU AND YOU COULD NEVER MESS THEM UP unless you include like... character death/rape/pedophilia/squicky things, etc .___. but I have full faith in you! If you want to read more well-characterized BloHyuk I suggest pretty much anything wobaozhewo writes as well as coley_merrin's Front Of House / Backstage and her Someone Like You series in her For Always verse 8) or anything in the blohyuk manifesto. lol :3

rodiy July 13 2010, 00:45:55 UTC

This better be the best freaking aphrodisiac known to man," he adds, and pops it into his mouth, swallowing after two chews and never taking his eyes off of Eunhyuk. You'd think with a shipname like theirs, no aphrodisiac would evar be needed. Hurhurhur

I like how the feel of this could potentailly be AU and at the same time be completely cannon. Also, Short and quick and inspired by salads has got me picturing Hyuk as a cherry tomato and Blo as the big leafy green he's trying to get to. Or! alternatively Blo as the dressing salad that got too excited and spilled himself all over him. What kind of dressing you ask? Something like this I'm imagine. :3

todefinebeauty July 25 2010, 21:48:13 UTC

You make a veeeeery good point there. :D

... Salad!AU? I like how Hyuk is a CHERRY TOMATO (like in that surviving winter Mnet... thing, Hyuk and his tomatoes :3) SALAD DRESSING. I knew before I clicked the link what kind of dressing you were referring to hahaha ♥