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tobinfic

Hangover, G

Jan 31, 2010 10:35

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ship wars, fic: star trek, rating: g, fic: het, mccoy/chapel

Comments 6

the_sexypancake January 31 2010, 20:48:24 UTC

Awww. Cute and simple. Though it was a little disconcerting that the first actual *name* didn't show up till 3/4 of the fic was through. It's not a problem, if it's done intentionally, but when it's not I get exasperated with FF authors. I assume you're of the former. Cheers!

the_sexypancake January 31 2010, 20:50:51 UTC

You know what? Now that I skim it again, there aren't any names! Except for Jim's name mentioned in passing. This little ficlet was done entirely on pronouns. LOL. For all that it mattered, I could have superimposed myself into this fic as the female. Haha. Well done.

fringedweller January 31 2010, 21:18:15 UTC

Yes, the reason for that is because it was a Team McChapel entry for Ship Wars. The header on the comment fic round made it clear there, and my tags made it clear here.

reasdream January 31 2010, 22:46:54 UTC

where do I get a comforter like that?

tobinfic January 31 2010, 22:52:30 UTC

Join the queue!

anr February 2 2011, 04:02:32 UTC

This is awesome; nice and sweet. :)