Comments | to_say_nothing: Fic: Three fics (NC-17: Chad/Ryan/Zeke, Zac Efron/Vincent Chase, PG-13: Xander Harris/Brendon Urie)

to_say_nothing

Fic: Three fics (NC-17: Chad/Ryan/Zeke, Zac Efron/Vincent Chase, PG-13: Xander Harris/Brendon Urie)

Apr 28, 2009 16:59

I fail at being anonymous. Three little fics I've written and posted at anon fests.

( So Very New a Thing - HSM, Chad/Ryan/Zeke, NC-17 )

patd, entourage, btvs, hsm, bandom

Comments 5

earlofcardigans April 29 2009, 00:34:02 UTC

That eyepatch is totally hot, Bden. Keep up.

allyndra April 29 2009, 04:40:17 UTC

So true.

Just wee little bits of feedback - sublimatedangel April 29 2009, 02:10:19 UTC

1) Hot and a little bit awkward, in a believable way. I tend to find threesome sex with young participants more believable anyhow, and I like the little touches of them having talked about it before, maybe hypothetically, and that Zeke has maybe had a few thoughts in that direction... and I like that it's not totally smooth and easy with it anyhow. I will admit that I had a hard time visualizing this... the positioning just didn't work in my head, and I'm not sure if that's on my side or yours. And to be honest, I would have enjoyed it even more if there had been more awkwardness, but then I'm a sucker for dorkiness and complexity. Still liked it for what it was ( ... )

Re: Just wee little bits of feedback - allyndra April 29 2009, 04:39:59 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to write me thoughtful feedback ( ... )

miniminkie April 29 2009, 05:48:06 UTC

holy mother of...Chad/Ryan/Zeke was so HOT so very very hot *fans self*
Zac Efron/Vincent Chase GUH *iz dead*
Xander/Brendon omg that was so good