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[tmk_fics]

Title: make him love me
Author: A
Pairing: Zayn/Liam
Rating: PG
Warning: this is just fluff, yo
Word count: 1700
Summary: a five times fic except actually only four times: the four times Zayn listens to Frank Ocean with his bandmates and one time he doesn’t. background Louis/Harry and…I suppose there’s also some Niall/Justin Bieber there but who really

Comments

[thesilverwitch]

i read your fic while listening to some of frank's stuff i have on my itunes from ziam fanmixes and oh man the combination of the two just made such a spectacular effect

i love your fic and i love how honest it is and i love your writing style and yeah god bless

[tmk_fics]

oh my goodness, thank you! I've read basically everything you've ever read ever so your comment on my writing style means a lot to me :)

[eccentricsimply]

This is genuinely beautiful and well written, I love it so much, plus Frank's songs and yes <3

[tmk_fics]

Thank youuuuu!

[shoreparty]

I don't even dig five times fic, but I adored this, truly.

I loved the discussion of security in their respective relationships. Just the phrasing of "very best friend" is such a special choice and pierces me right in the gut nnnghhh. I could just hear it in Louis' voice too. He's such a sage :)

Liam is a bit dopey at first, which is just perfect.

Zayn tentatively tongues at the bow of Liam’s upper lip.

WHYYYY did you put that image in my head. As if Liam's mouth doesn't haunt my dreams enough.

he’s reshaping the word unrequited with the taste of Liam’s mouth

Oh, that's actually sublime. Love you, darling.

[tmk_fics]

:DDDDDDD thank you effy! your comments always make me smile so much oh my goodness. LIAM'S MOUTH THOUGH I have too many feelings about it it's ridiculous and zayn's mouth and ziam's mouth together omg I can't. Ugh tysm again this comment is making me so ridiculous happy :)