Title: make him love me
Author: A
Pairing: Zayn/Liam
Rating: PG
Warning: this is just fluff, yo
Word count: 1700
Summary: a five times fic except actually only four times: the four times Zayn listens to Frank Ocean with his bandmates and one time he doesn’t. background Louis/Harry and…I suppose there’s also some Niall/Justin Bieber there but who really
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i love your fic and i love how honest it is and i love your writing style and yeah god bless
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I loved the discussion of security in their respective relationships. Just the phrasing of "very best friend" is such a special choice and pierces me right in the gut nnnghhh. I could just hear it in Louis' voice too. He's such a sage :)
Liam is a bit dopey at first, which is just perfect.
Zayn tentatively tongues at the bow of Liam’s upper lip.
WHYYYY did you put that image in my head. As if Liam's mouth doesn't haunt my dreams enough.
he’s reshaping the word unrequited with the taste of Liam’s mouth
Oh, that's actually sublime. Love you, darling.
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