Fic: A Certain Thought that Lingers - (1/20) (Clark/Bruce)

[tmelange]

Title: A Certain Thought that Lingers
Pairing: Superman/Batman
Rating: R
Verse: DCU/DCAU
Word Count: 13,439
Summary: The decision to use a telepathic link to allow the Justice League to communicate during battle backfires, creating a special bond between Superman and Batman. Batman finds the situation...unbearable.

Comments

[ladybugkay]

In the midst of all the posturing and aggressive confrontations, you can feel that creeping feeling of something about to go incontrovertibly wrong. Great use of foreshadowing.

And Batman is being such an ass... LOL

[tmelange]

Batman is a real ass in this story, and we never really get to see why he deserves Clark's attention at all. I guess the Bat is just lucky like that. ;)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, Kay.

[judin]

Beautiful cover art.

I laughed out loud at the "big blue butthead"-comment. I love it when they bicker. I love it when you write their bickering.

I also loved the prologue. It was deep, which sounds silly, but it was. You opened with angst there and followed it up with humour here, but all the time there's the knowledge that it's going to spiral into disaster soon. I can't wait!

[tmelange]

>>but all the time there's the knowledge that it's going to spiral into disaster soon.

I'm all about the disaster! LOL

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, J.

[saavikam77]

Methinks the boys do protest too much. ^_~

I love your use of WW as a referee. She'd be able to handle them if things got out of hand, anyway. :p

[tmelange]

>>I love your use of WW as a referee.

Diana is a character that i would write if I had more time and more interest in het fanfic. She's so much fun.

Thanks for reading and commenting, Ella. I really do appreciate it. :)