Comedy of Errors, part 1 of 2

[tkeylasunset]

Title: Comedy of Errors
Written for: 1_million_words nbsp;Holiday Happenings
It was supposed to be posted on Valentine’s Day but it’s so long, I’m posting part 1 today and the rest tomorrow.
Rating: NC-17
Characters: Steve/Danny, Chin, Kono
Summary: Steve and Danny have engaged in their mating dance long enough. Friends, acquaintances, strangers are fed up and

Comments

[sexycazzy]

That was just so awesome! Can't wait for the next part! *g*

[tkeylasunset]

Thank you so much! Hope you enjoyed part 2 as well!!

<3

[rungirl60]

Wonderful start! I love how Danny was embarrassed, but still folded under Ohana pressure. I love how Steve rolls with it, cause it's Danny. I love how they are already so married, with a kid who they adore! Can't wait for the next part.

[tkeylasunset]

Thank you so much!! I hope you enjoyed the second part as well!!

Steve so completely trusts Danny, he'll do pretty much whatever he wants! And Danny knows his ohana loves him. So it's all good, isn't it?

Thank you again!!!

[landrews]

I lol'ed at the premise- am thoroughly looking forward to the second half :-)

[tkeylasunset]

Thank you so much!!!

I hope you enjoyed part 2 as well!!

I had fun writing it, so I'm glad it made you laugh!! That's win!

Happy Valentine's Day!

[bymagajones]

What a terrific Valentine's Day story! The perfect little detail was Grace's $4.24. I'm looking forward to the rest of it tomorrow.

[tkeylasunset]

$4.24 for the win!!!

Thank you so much!! I hope you also enjoyed part 2.

Happy Valentine's Day!!!

[navyvet90]

Lovin' this! Their banter is extraordinary throughout. The date would have been perfect if it weren't for the strange, rude maitre d'. Excited to see where this goes!

[tkeylasunset]

I love writing their banter. I guess that isn't too obvious, is it? :-)

Hope you enjoyed part 2!

Thank you for the lovely comment. And Happy Valentine's Day!