A Warrior’s Desire part 2

[tkeylasunset]

Title: A Warrior's Desire part 2
Author: tkeylasunset
Word Count: (this part) ~6500
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Rating: PG (may go up)
Characters/Pairings: pre-slash Steve & Danny
Warnings None that I know of
Summary: Steve and Danny begin their journey to find and retrieve Grace. They meet some unexpected residents and begin to discover some unexpected truths.

Comments

[simplyn2deep]

Dl’elda sounds absolutely adorable

I like how a lot of things Steve takes at face value and how Danny doesn't mind explaining things to Steve when necessary

In reading this, it's like a cross between the Percy Jackson books and maybe The Chronicles of Narnia...in my opinion. It's the magical world you're taken to while reading and I love it.

Can't wait for more!

[gyri]

Eee! I am enjoying this so much!

[abbeyrd62561]

another wonderful chapter. I so enjoyed all the different things you had Danny explain to Steve, the beholders and all. The magic that Steve is now starting to see in himself and taking everything at face value. I love the fairy, she is brilliant, so cute. The way the Esri welcomed Danny and was honored to have them stay. You are weaving a wonderful story that I am really enjoying, thanks can't wait for more.

[dante_s_hell]

Wow, just wow! The world building is amazing!